Travis Coleman

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Just enough to make me shudder

I love the story here. It makes me think of the phrase "The kid's aren't right" but holds your attention until you find out why. You are left with a story that moves quickly, not spending time on needless description, but still has an impact at the end.

(Sorry about the pun)

All in all, the image it leaves me with is one of dread. One where should I be put in that situation I would be struck with uncertainty as to how to proceed. But by then it might be just too late.

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