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So may twists and turns

Premise is awesome and the plot well thought out and measured. The storyline is well metered and flows well, it doesn't feel rushed or hurried. The grammar and spelling are very good, makes such a grand change. The characters are well formed and full of life. A great read for the side of the pool or at the beach for a relaxing time. 8/10.

Ode to high school drama

Edit please!!!! The premise is great. The plot is good as is the storyline. Grammar and spelling are not the best but the tale is readable. The characters are good but watch for shifting names and pop up characters. All in all this is a good read it just needs a firm edit. 7/10.

A wonderful tale

An edit is needed ASAP!!!! That being said, this is a wonderful tale. The plot is solid and well thought . The storyline is well plotted and flows freely. The grammar and spelling need a lot of help, nothing a grammar app can't solve. The characters make this tale glow, they are not sappy or cardboard flat but full and believable. Their pain in heart felt and not made to feel fake or childish. When they turn the page and begin to live again, it feels right and not rushed. While the grammar and spelling errors can make this hard to read and at times the author's message gets mangled the tale is still very good 8/10.

Too rushed

Rushed, where the first was a nice ramble this is more a power walk. The plot has holes, why was she targeted and what happened to all the rogues. The storyline is a river in monsoon not a babbling brook. The grammar and spelling are less percise, feels rushed. The characters also don't have the same solid feel as the first tale. A good edit would do this tale good.

Superb

Novel and inventive, a one of a kind. The characters are amazing so funny and entertaining. The storyline flows like warm fudge. Spelling and grammar are very good. The premise and plot are wonderful!!!! Love this tale. The only disappointment is that there is a wait for book 2. Oh well, good things cum to those who wait, just ask Kitty.😉

Great first book

The premise and plot are solid. The storyline is not always smooth but is still readable. The grammar and spelling are good, needs an edit but does not detract from the plot or storyline. The characters are good. This is a great beach read, this trilogy ( if the writing is as good) will make a wonderful vacation reading list. 8/10 Hope the next one is done soon.😎

WOW

Once again the premise and plot are great. The storyline is well constructed and flows well. The spelling and grammar are still huge issues but damn I still love these books. The characters keep getting better, I can not say I have loved all the characters - Eve is iffy- but this pairing had so much depth and raw power it was the best book so far. Can't wait for the next one. 9/10.

Great plot needs edit

The premise is great. The plot is solid. The storyline flows well and is easy to follow. The grammar and spelling need an edit. The characters are wonderful full of color and vibrancy. Once again the problem falls on lack of a grammar app. Grammarly is a free grammar app easy to use and understand. 8/10

Long and slow but worth the effort

The premise of this tale is amazing. The plot is well thought out and rich. The storyline is slow and at times like walking through knee-high mud but still manages to convey the plot. The grammar and spelling are bad, it sometimes interferes with the plot and storyline, needs an edit ASAP. The characters are wonderfully full and colorful they are the reason I kept reading. This is a wonderful tale whose main problem is the lack of a grammar app when it was being written. Looking forward to reading this after a complete edit. 8/10

Sexy Romp

This is delicious, wonderfully sexy romp, full of fun and sassy swagger. The plot is solid. The storyline flows like hot fudge. The spelling ans grammar need an edit but the errors don't overshadow the sparkle of this tale. The characters are great, such fun and snark. I had trouble deciding who to root for him or her. A 9/10 after the edit it will be a grand slam 10/10.