Tshena

Born For Harmony Volume 1

This novel is cramazing. I really loved it's plot and I'm obsessed with Gray and Jenny's love story. It is so magical and yet so real.I really enjoyed getting to hear both Gray and Jenna's perspective of things..... it tied the whole book together. I just wish that the characters were not so all over the place and more .... there. I mean this with all due respect but while reading the book, I found it hard to keep track of all the characters who were so loose yet they played such a major part in this story. Like Melanie, Gray's cousin, she also had powers yet we only got to read about her in a few chapters. But other than that I think your book is well written and planned. I love the hints you kept leaving about Symphonier. I would recommend this book to every teenager out there and adults too.

Ps: You shouldn't let people read this for free.... it's great.

Great idea

I genuinely found this book so attracting when I heard about the plot. It was a great idea and had a lot of potential but I think the writer didn't execute the idead how they should've been executed.

Mainly, the characters were so dull, and boring. They were typical cliches and had no uniqueness in them. I also wished that certain scenes had more emotion and reality in between them. For example, Draecon is the cunning alpha of a pack but has no element that would make me think he is cunning and bad. I also wished that the betas and gammas also got to express thrir feelings of not being with their mates.

Overall I think this book had potential but lacked the correct execution. I meant this a constructional criticism and hope the writer can get thr view I'm coming from.