Ulfha Olivia Ulya

Singapore

Olivia is a freelance writer. When she isn’t writing, she loves to watch Asian dramas & get too emotional afterward. You can connect with her on twitter @ulfha_olivia or instagram @ulfhaoliviaulya

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Lovely

One word... it's so lovely... okay I made in many words... simply profane and lovely. It was so vulnerable, not sad... but vulnerable... very good choice of words you created!! keep on writing the poem...

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Intriguing

At first and honestly, fantasy wasn't really my cup of tea kind of story I'd like to read, but then.... Voila... you get me hooked! The story intrigued me, the character especially Yor and the girl name (Em... sorry I forgot the name as it was very unusual name you chose yet it fit her) made me pondered, I just finished part 5 and definitely will read more of it. Though can I ask you something... or perhaps since I haven't read all of it, I want to know how Yor 'look like' how old was he? How was his feature... can you please describe... if you had, well then forgive me.... hahaha over all love the story.... great job!!!

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Intriguing

It's very intriguing story and I love how you picked up the 7 princess' names, they were so out-worldly. Love the connection you write among the sisters and it got me hooked though I was a bit confused with the setting when amber stated the mall... where do they live since I read about Rowan worry about his mother travel about the war and etc...

Hence overall, love the story and can't wait to read the rest of the story....

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Hooked by the story

Hey there, I can't give you the story overall of 5 stars as I haven't known the end, though so far I love the story especially from her point of view every time you began the new chapter. I love the way you write, Not to complicated yet I can really imagine what the characters of the story 'looks' As the title is Bad Intention, I assume there will be some twisted there, perhaps the battle between the brother.... hahaha... I also can't wait to read what happen to the girl's life... why she was so in pain about love and the past. I hope you do write about her background.

Keep up a good work... Can't wait for more....

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