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Amazing!

Great book! I don't love thrillers, so it wasn't my favorite, but it was a great one-time read! So, well done, apart from a few grammatical errors.

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Nice.

Good, but the book is like a run-on sentence. The punctuation is missing in many sentences, and I find it difficult to understand the book. The plot is great, but the grammar needs help. I love the plot and wish the author luck.

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Very good!

I already wrote a review from my other account @ignore_me_now, but this book def deserves another one. It is so amazing, and Holland is an amazing author. Apart from some grammatical errors, there is nothing I would say no to in this book!

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Really Nice!

I just started reading the book, but it's still so amazing! I will def read it again if I didn't have such a long list of books to read! But it's amazing all the same. I would definitely advise you to read it!

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Awesome!

I love the book, but the grammar is slightly off. All the same, I would definitely give it a go!

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Great!

Firstly, I want to say how amazing it is that this writer wrote this book even if with a few grammatical mistakes. It is truly an accomplishment!
Next, I want to congratulate the writer on the beauty of the fact that the readers are able to grope on to the emotions and the descriptions of the main characters, even if it was a third person's point of view! I don't know how I could have made it any better! All I found problematic was the grammar, but I truly loved everything else!

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The description really caught my eye!

The descriptions this author uses is probably the most amazing thing about the book, and that is saying something! I can imagine every scene clearly in my head, I can feel every emotion that the author is trying to portray, The book takes us on an adventure with many twists and turns. I can't point out one mistake other than the few grammatical mistakes that even an editor would ignore! I could read this book many times and never tire of the beauty in the descriptions and the plot!

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Love!

I loved the twists and the turns of the story. The book's grammatical errors are nothing in comparison to the moving of the beautiful plot. The story is different compared to others and I love it!

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4 stars!

This book is truly the most erotic book that has been read by me. I would say that the grammar is quite off putting, but everything else is quite nice.
- Norleigh (Ulta's Sister)

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Very creative!

I love how the author develops the characters personality! The depiction of the different characters and their emotions and personality really caught me off guard. I felt every one of the emotions coming through. I loved the fact that the plot took change in every direction and the main character was not the "good" girl like in every story. It was different than other books I have read. The grammar was slightly off, but still better than other books I have read. I truly enjoyed it!

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Amazing!

This is one of the only books that I have read without many grammatical errors and that just pulled me into the trap this author has created. The book has so many tiny details, from the heights and the looks of people to the passion with which she has written. I don't know how this can be better, it's truly amazing!

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Amazing!

I love how the actual book is better than what you might think when you first saw it! It's so beautiful how the story progresses. Give it a read instead of reading this review!

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Loooooooooooove!!!

This book is soooo enticing. I would read it if I was you. The structure of the story starts off as very sarcastic, but it is quite beautiful and amazing. The characters were so kind to the end. So amazing!

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Amazing!

The book is very much in detail, which is one of my favorite parts of the book. Other than that, the plot is very enticing, although it does need a bit of help, as at some points it moves too fast, or too slow. Otherwise, the character development is seen easily even in the first chapter. The grammatical errors caused me to not love the book, but it's pretty good otherwise.

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Good book.

Really good book, but has a lot of grammatical errors. That, and the sentences being run-on and the whole chapter being in one paragraph caused me to give you 4 stars. The story is great otherwise!

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Good, but not quite there.

Great book, but needs editing help. Otherwise, it's a nice twist to superhero books!

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Great!

I truly love the mystery and thriller parts of this book, and that's saying something. I usually opt for romance, but this book was so amazing with the twists and turns. Now, I think this author has changed my opinion!

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Pretty Good.

My average review is 4 stars, because I loved the plot of the book, but I thought it moved very fast in some chapters and too slow in others. Otherwise, it was pretty amazing! Keep it up, and keep growing!

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Amazing

Reading it a million times is not enough for me. It truly is amazing. Apart from the few grammatical errors, this book could be one of the best books I have read yet on Inkitt.
Well done!
All I ask is for the author to update it, although, in the author's defense, writing a book can be hard....

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Amazing!

I love the way the book makes us want to read it. I really wish the best for the author!

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So funny!

It's so humorous, one of my favorite genres, so it is really amazing!

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I love it!

This book has a different view on werewolves, so I love it!

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Really good.

The ending was slightly abrupt, but it was a beautiful short story!

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Great!

This story may be slightly short, but it moves along decently. I really liked it and I hope you read it too!

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