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I try everything, well, sort of. Description: Dynamic; A little bit bad (unless you're a friend.) Knows Jui Jitsu. Follows back. Weirdo - Deal with it.

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Hilarious!

I love how it's like a breath of fresh air! Funny, sarcastic, amazing! The grammar is amazing! I don't even know what else to say! It's a cute book with more than just a few funny scenes. It's so cute when I see the two MCs fall in love!

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I really liked it!

The book's plot was really nice, although, to be honest, I'm not that big of a fan of BTS. I love their songs, but I don't like fanfiction based on them. This book changed my mind completely! Now, fanfics are loved by me! I could read it again and again and not get bored. Second, this book's character development was beautiful and one of my favorite parts of the book. I also love how the grammar is pretty nice! I really like the plot, as I said before! The structure of the story is confusing, and that's how I like it. I have to imagine everything to truly understand. I really liked it!

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Amazing book.

Ok, firstly, this book needs to be read by anyone who's wasting their time reading the reviews.
Anyway, the book's plot is so deep, yet understated. It shows the shallowness and innocence of young children while they grow along with how the character's grow after becoming adults. Plus, the steamy scenes are definitely enough to check it out. ;)
The flow of the story is so smooth, even though most of it is as a flashback. It's amazing how Emmy and Stoic don't just fall in love right away. The book actually begins with Emmy hating Stoic and it makes us want to hate him too! It's understandable that we would hate Stoic, but afterwards, even if we know what he did was wrong, we, as readers, still feel like Stoic had a valid reason. The emotions portrayed in the story feel like they are real and they make me want to read more!
The punctuation, oh, I'm in heaven! I mean, being an editor, pointing out grammatical errors are easy, but in this book, I had to nitpick to find anything wrong! And that's saying something.
I don't find anything hard to read or hard to understand in this book. I would actually want more chapters, now that I think about it, because I feel so sad that the book is over!
All in all, reading it would be one of the best decisions you could take about books. Also, teens below 18, stay away from this book!

- Norleigh (Ulta's Sister)

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No Grammatical Mistakes! I think I'm in heaven...

I gave this amazing book an amazing review for obvious reasons. The storyline has almost perfect characteristics. It flows very well. The sentences are slightly long, but still easily understandable. I find that the author used beautiful adjectives from the first chapter itself. That's something difficult for many authors and I found this book to incorporate the descriptions perfectly. The character development is heaven. The words use to describe the personalities and the emotions of the characters make me feel like what I'm reading is real! It's beautiful how the character's emotions make me imagine a better concept for life, even if there are problems. The story moves so beautifully, I can't imagine how it could be better. Instead of most stories where you need less details, I'd be asking for more. That too, because I want more of the story and am feeling sad that it's over already!

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Amazing!

Great book! I don't love thrillers, so it wasn't my favorite, but it was a great one-time read! So, well done, apart from a few grammatical errors.

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Nice.

Good, but the book is like a run-on sentence. The punctuation is missing in many sentences, and I find it difficult to understand the book. The plot is great, but the grammar needs help. I love the plot and wish the author luck.

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Amazing

Reading it a million times is not enough for me. It truly is amazing. Apart from the few grammatical errors, this book could be one of the best books I have read yet on Inkitt.
Well done!
All I ask is for the author to update it, although, in the author's defense, writing a book can be hard....

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Very good!

I already wrote a review from my other account @ignore_me_now, but this book def deserves another one. It is so amazing, and Holland is an amazing author. Apart from some grammatical errors, there is nothing I would say no to in this book!

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Awesome!

I love the book, but the grammar is slightly off. All the same, I would definitely give it a go!

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I don't know what to say!

The details were immaculate! I could imagine the scenes so clearly in my mind. The way you portrayed the emotions for the readers makes us immerse ourselves in the story. I could feel every bit of the story in my heart. The pinches that might come from heartbreak, the fullness that comes from happiness, the fast-paced beating that could come from anywhere, and the ecstasy that comes from laughter were so full in the book. I don't know how to compliment it more. I need to commend the author on the beauty of the emotive components in the book. They truly made my heart beat faster in different scenes.
The plot was a masterpiece in terms of the movement, the details, the structure, the music that I call imagination, the realistic-fictional components. It was all so clear, yet merged with each other. This, again, is not easy to perceive in a book unless the author truly knows what they are doing.
The structure was just perfection. I loved how the twists-and-turns of the story were hard to find, yet clear. I loved how the book was sort of like an emotional roller-coaster and that I could feel the changes in emotion in my heart and reactions. It's something difficult to find in books written by amateurs.
The writing style and grammar were really nice, although, I wouldn't go as far as to say they were perfect. Although I loved how the mistakes were far away from each other, I can't quite get over them either. I found a few run-on sentences and missing commas here and there but it wasn't something that pops out to you, so it can be easily forgiven.
The character development shows us the story of how the character grows. This book proves that. Even though I can find a few mistakes grammatically, I can see the development of the characters easily. I can see how each characters emotions and emotional pursuits grow in a way that makes us, as readers, want to read more!
This book deserves a read and a like, so just go on and do the same! I promise you, you won't regret it! Thank you for reading my review!

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Amazing!

Imagine a book with a millionaire, snarky, super cool, bad girl type character who has emotions having a crush on a millionaire bad boy! It's like a cliché without the good girl! That's what makes this story different, it has a common plot, but with a twist.
The plot moves in a buttery manner, although, the book doesn't have enough chapters for me to comment on what's going to happen next, I think I have a fair idea. That's what makes it fun! I can guess what's coming next, but I won't know this soon!
The character development is beautiful, I can see the change in Eva's personality as I see her soft side. That's usually hard to find in books, because the mc is usually very subtle, and her emotions are difficult to oust. This book shows the emotions as well as the sarcasticity that she owns.
When it comes to the structure of the story, it's very clean. It moves as the characters introduce their emotions. It's something, again, hard to find. I have to commend the author on their amazing work!
I love it, give it a try, yeah?

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It was a good cliché!

It had both hilarious parts and parts that made me want to weep. It was sober at points, but then it well all-out fun! It was cliché at points, but then I could see some parts that were unique. It had the MCs learning how to fight against their parents, even though they knew that they'd get in trouble. It was a fictional ride away from real-life.
One of the best parts of the story was that I could relate to the parents dominating over the MCs lives. That happens very often in real-life, but in fictional books, most authors focus on the other, worse parts of the stories.
The plot of the story was very fun-to-read and full-of-life. It's a great one-time read. The character development was not at par with other stories I've read based on the same cliché events, but I understand that it is hard to turn a plot that can be read anywhere into your own. By this, I mean that the development was very irritating, as Nicholas fell in love with Theora in a few minutes, at least, that's what could be understood from the book. The second he realized he was wrong, he fell in love. It's quite confusing, in my opinion.
I loved how the story flowed, but I do wish that there were more details. Otherwise, it's good to go!

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Nice book.

Imagine a tumultuous rollercoaster. One time at it's high, barely a second later, it's as low as it can go. That's what this book is like. Every chapter, there's a question in your mind. The flow of the story is so smooth, with nothing too difficult to read and the sentences short and sweet. This is something that is quite hard to find in books, especially ones that are 18+.
Secondly, the plot of the story is beautiful. Perfect, yet not quite there. That's something special. Everyone wants to write a story that is perfect and that ends up with a book that's like a twin of another cliché book. This book is cliché, yes, but it is also something unique. I said that it's not quite there because of the fact that nothing can be perfect and this book proves that through the plot.
The technical writing, the grammar, the punctuation, etc. was pretty good. I think that you should read the book based on that, because it's hard to find here on Inkitt.
I would say that's it's definitely worth a go for people over 18!

- Norleigh (Ulta's Sister)

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Really Charming Book!

Like all love stories, this has complexities, but the complexities are placed in such a manner, that I can't imagine not reading more! It hooked me from the very first chapter. I especially loved the addition of Spanish when Aldina spoke to Rosa.

More than that though, I loved the charming story between the Angel and the Flower. It's sad though, how, like most love stories, this one has some sad parent factor. If you read the book, you'll know what I'm talking about.

Anyway, I need another chapter, mostly because I want to see Aldina and Noah to meet each other. I want to see how Gabriel reacts when he meets Aldina. It's something I'm so excited to see!!! Anyway, I love how this book's plot makes us look away from the grammatical mistakes, which are not very profound. I love how the plot is so smooth and that it doesn't need much explanation.

It's simple yet complex. It's euphoric, yet quite grim. It's beautiful, yet has a moment of dullness. It's unique, but not without some cliche moments. It makes me want to read more, but at the same time, leave when it's at it's peak, not wanting it to come tumbling down. It's realistic, yet fictional. What else could you need? It's a paradox in itself and that's what makes me want to keep reading.

I love how Aldina learns how to break out of her binds, but not without some problems awaiting her. I love how you accept all sexualities in the book, even though it's boy x girl. The best part of the book is when Aldina is willing to help Noah, even though she knows that she may have to leave him. It's sad, yes, but the feeling of profound love just flowing through me was enough to make me feel the emotions that I couldn't even imagine! It's something very few authors can provide.

The structure of the story is like a rollercoaster, you never know what's going to happen next. I was just expecting the book to finish when Aldina first utters those three words, but no, it went in another direction completely.

In short, this book is nothing less of a ride. You'd love it if you gave it a try. Thank you for reading my giant review!

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Grammar is perfection.

Is there anything more to say? I mean, grammar is great. The story is great. The plot is smooth yet enjoyable. The writing style is very friendly yet formal. The characters are so cute. Good story overall!

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Great book!

I don't know what to say! It's a short story, but it contains emotions, as well as details that just strike my heart. It shows the pain of a woman and the happiness that she finds when her husband finally understands. The happiness that they both find when their child is born! Just amazing!

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Great book!

I already wanna read it again! I wish that people like Liam, Caroline, Claire, Derek actually existed! By that, I mean people who care about everyone, even if it takes time for them to open up. I am that type of a person, but no matter what I do, I can't find someone to care about me....other than my family, of course...
Anyway, other than the few mistakes in the character's names, I love this book!

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A great start!

I know that this book has barely begun, but I can see the comparative it gives to the real world! I also would like to say that all authors deserve support, so at least give this book's author a follow! Anyway, I would read this book if I were you!
I would like to congratulate the author on the first chapter being nearly picture perfect! I, when I first started to write my book, couldn't even tell where the apostrophe was supposed to go! I was so nervous, it's a good thing my sister is an editor, she helped me out!
Anyway, back to the author. You have done amazing for the first chapter! Although, I would like to say that in the description, there is a slight error, no human is perfect, so it's alright. I think you meant "one of the most handsomest men in the world". Otherwise, a-maz-ing!
Also, to the people who are reading this review, you are wasting your time! Go to the book! Reviews can never capture the essence of a book.

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Great Book!

I don't know what to say about this book! I mean, the details are to the point, even if it is slightly incorrect grammatically. The few errors do not compare to the perfection of the plot, the writing style, the writing skills, the beauty of the details, the feeling of utter joy whenever I read happy parts and full-on despair when I read the parts which make me sob.
I love how the emotions have been categorized so perfectly, I love how the plot goes as Aria and Gio fall in love. It's a story that feels very unrealistically true. I imagine such situations in my mind, and I hope that it was me, even though I know that this situation cannot take place in real life.
I also love how I can read this book and forgo all of the emotions that exist in real life, whether they are happiness or sadness.
The only thing I do not love about this book is....let me think....I am not sure! The whole book is truly, truly, truly one of the best I have ever read. I wish the author the best of luck!
And listen to be carefully, read this book please, as soon as you can!

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Really Good Book!

Firstly, I would like to congratulate the author for the creation of a book with little-to-no grammatical errors.
Secondly, I have read many books of the same caliber and category, where a famous man meets a unknown girl and they become pregnant. In fact, I am writing a book on similar lines! This book, shows this plot line in a manner that makes you want to read more!
Thirdly, I'd like to tell the author to continue to update the book, because this book adds a fresh look to the regular drama/romance category.
Last, but not least, I'd like to say that this book is for everyone! So, pick up your devices and start to read this book A.S.A.P!

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Great!

Firstly, I want to say how amazing it is that this writer wrote this book even if with a few grammatical mistakes. It is truly an accomplishment!
Next, I want to congratulate the writer on the beauty of the fact that the readers are able to grope on to the emotions and the descriptions of the main characters, even if it was a third person's point of view! I don't know how I could have made it any better! All I found problematic was the grammar, but I truly loved everything else!

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The description really caught my eye!

The descriptions this author uses is probably the most amazing thing about the book, and that is saying something! I can imagine every scene clearly in my head, I can feel every emotion that the author is trying to portray, The book takes us on an adventure with many twists and turns. I can't point out one mistake other than the few grammatical mistakes that even an editor would ignore! I could read this book many times and never tire of the beauty in the descriptions and the plot!

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Love!

I loved the twists and the turns of the story. The book's grammatical errors are nothing in comparison to the moving of the beautiful plot. The story is different compared to others and I love it!

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4 stars!

This book is truly the most erotic book that has been read by me. I would say that the grammar is quite off putting, but everything else is quite nice.
- Norleigh (Ulta's Sister)

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Very creative!

I love how the author develops the characters personality! The depiction of the different characters and their emotions and personality really caught me off guard. I felt every one of the emotions coming through. I loved the fact that the plot took change in every direction and the main character was not the "good" girl like in every story. It was different than other books I have read. The grammar was slightly off, but still better than other books I have read. I truly enjoyed it!

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Amazing!

This is one of the only books that I have read without many grammatical errors and that just pulled me into the trap this author has created. The book has so many tiny details, from the heights and the looks of people to the passion with which she has written. I don't know how this can be better, it's truly amazing!

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Amazing!

I love how the actual book is better than what you might think when you first saw it! It's so beautiful how the story progresses. Give it a read instead of reading this review!

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Loooooooooooove!!!

This book is soooo enticing. I would read it if I was you. The structure of the story starts off as very sarcastic, but it is quite beautiful and amazing. The characters were so kind to the end. So amazing!

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Amazing!

The book is very much in detail, which is one of my favorite parts of the book. Other than that, the plot is very enticing, although it does need a bit of help, as at some points it moves too fast, or too slow. Otherwise, the character development is seen easily even in the first chapter. The grammatical errors caused me to not love the book, but it's pretty good otherwise.

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Good book.

Really good book, but has a lot of grammatical errors. That, and the sentences being run-on and the whole chapter being in one paragraph caused me to give you 4 stars. The story is great otherwise!

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Good, but not quite there.

Great book, but needs editing help. Otherwise, it's a nice twist to superhero books!

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Great!

I truly love the mystery and thriller parts of this book, and that's saying something. I usually opt for romance, but this book was so amazing with the twists and turns. Now, I think this author has changed my opinion!

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Pretty Good.

My average review is 4 stars, because I loved the plot of the book, but I thought it moved very fast in some chapters and too slow in others. Otherwise, it was pretty amazing! Keep it up, and keep growing!

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Amazing!

I love the way the book makes us want to read it. I really wish the best for the author!

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So funny!

It's so humorous, one of my favorite genres, so it is really amazing!

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I love it!

This book has a different view on werewolves, so I love it!

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Really good.

The ending was slightly abrupt, but it was a beautiful short story!

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Great!

This story may be slightly short, but it moves along decently. I really liked it and I hope you read it too!

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