Ultimate

I really liked it!

The book's plot was really nice, although, to be honest, I'm not that big of a fan of BTS. I love their songs, but I don't like fanfiction based on them. This book changed my mind completely! Now, fanfics are loved by me! I could read it again and again and not get bored. Second, this book's character development was beautiful and one of my favorite parts of the book. I also love how the grammar is pretty nice! I really like the plot, as I said before! The structure of the story is confusing, and that's how I like it. I have to imagine everything to truly understand. I really liked it!

Amazing book.

Ok, firstly, this book needs to be read by anyone who's wasting their time reading the reviews.
Anyway, the book's plot is so deep, yet understated. It shows the shallowness and innocence of young children while they grow along with how the character's grow after becoming adults. Plus, the steamy scenes are definitely enough to check it out. ;)
The flow of the story is so smooth, even though most of it is as a flashback. It's amazing how Emmy and Stoic don't just fall in love right away. The book actually begins with Emmy hating Stoic and it makes us want to hate him too! It's understandable that we would hate Stoic, but afterwards, even if we know what he did was wrong, we, as readers, still feel like Stoic had a valid reason. The emotions portrayed in the story feel like they are real and they make me want to read more!
The punctuation, oh, I'm in heaven! I mean, being an editor, pointing out grammatical errors are easy, but in this book, I had to nitpick to find anything wrong! And that's saying something.
I don't find anything hard to read or hard to understand in this book. I would actually want more chapters, now that I think about it, because I feel so sad that the book is over!
All in all, reading it would be one of the best decisions you could take about books. Also, teens below 18, stay away from this book!

- Norleigh (Ulta's Sister)

No Grammatical Mistakes! I think I'm in heaven...

I gave this amazing book an amazing review for obvious reasons. The storyline has almost perfect characteristics. It flows very well. The sentences are slightly long, but still easily understandable. I find that the author used beautiful adjectives from the first chapter itself. That's something difficult for many authors and I found this book to incorporate the descriptions perfectly. The character development is heaven. The words use to describe the personalities and the emotions of the characters make me feel like what I'm reading is real! It's beautiful how the character's emotions make me imagine a better concept for life, even if there are problems. The story moves so beautifully, I can't imagine how it could be better. Instead of most stories where you need less details, I'd be asking for more. That too, because I want more of the story and am feeling sad that it's over already!

Amazing!

Great book! I don't love thrillers, so it wasn't my favorite, but it was a great one-time read! So, well done, apart from a few grammatical errors.

Amazing

Reading it a million times is not enough for me. It truly is amazing. Apart from the few grammatical errors, this book could be one of the best books I have read yet on Inkitt.
Well done!
All I ask is for the author to update it, although, in the author's defense, writing a book can be hard....

Very good!

I already wrote a review from my other account @ignore_me_now, but this book def deserves another one. It is so amazing, and Holland is an amazing author. Apart from some grammatical errors, there is nothing I would say no to in this book!

Nice book.

Imagine a tumultuous rollercoaster. One time at it's high, barely a second later, it's as low as it can go. That's what this book is like. Every chapter, there's a question in your mind. The flow of the story is so smooth, with nothing too difficult to read and the sentences short and sweet. This is something that is quite hard to find in books, especially ones that are 18+.
Secondly, the plot of the story is beautiful. Perfect, yet not quite there. That's something special. Everyone wants to write a story that is perfect and that ends up with a book that's like a twin of another cliché book. This book is cliché, yes, but it is also something unique. I said that it's not quite there because of the fact that nothing can be perfect and this book proves that through the plot.
The technical writing, the grammar, the punctuation, etc. was pretty good. I think that you should read the book based on that, because it's hard to find here on Inkitt.
I would say that's it's definitely worth a go for people over 18!

- Norleigh (Ulta's Sister)

Really Charming Book!

Like all love stories, this has complexities, but the complexities are placed in such a manner, that I can't imagine not reading more! It hooked me from the very first chapter. I especially loved the addition of Spanish when Aldina spoke to Rosa.

More than that though, I loved the charming story between the Angel and the Flower. It's sad though, how, like most love stories, this one has some sad parent factor. If you read the book, you'll know what I'm talking about.

Anyway, I need another chapter, mostly because I want to see Aldina and Noah to meet each other. I want to see how Gabriel reacts when he meets Aldina. It's something I'm so excited to see!!! Anyway, I love how this book's plot makes us look away from the grammatical mistakes, which are not very profound. I love how the plot is so smooth and that it doesn't need much explanation.

It's simple yet complex. It's euphoric, yet quite grim. It's beautiful, yet has a moment of dullness. It's unique, but not without some cliche moments. It makes me want to read more, but at the same time, leave when it's at it's peak, not wanting it to come tumbling down. It's realistic, yet fictional. What else could you need? It's a paradox in itself and that's what makes me want to keep reading.

I love how Aldina learns how to break out of her binds, but not without some problems awaiting her. I love how you accept all sexualities in the book, even though it's boy x girl. The best part of the book is when Aldina is willing to help Noah, even though she knows that she may have to leave him. It's sad, yes, but the feeling of profound love just flowing through me was enough to make me feel the emotions that I couldn't even imagine! It's something very few authors can provide.

The structure of the story is like a rollercoaster, you never know what's going to happen next. I was just expecting the book to finish when Aldina first utters those three words, but no, it went in another direction completely.

In short, this book is nothing less of a ride. You'd love it if you gave it a try. Thank you for reading my giant review!

Great book!

I don't know what to say! It's a short story, but it contains emotions, as well as details that just strike my heart. It shows the pain of a woman and the happiness that she finds when her husband finally understands. The happiness that they both find when their child is born! Just amazing!

Really Good Book!

Firstly, I would like to congratulate the author for the creation of a book with little-to-no grammatical errors.
Secondly, I have read many books of the same caliber and category, where a famous man meets a unknown girl and they become pregnant. In fact, I am writing a book on similar lines! This book, shows this plot line in a manner that makes you want to read more!
Thirdly, I'd like to tell the author to continue to update the book, because this book adds a fresh look to the regular drama/romance category.
Last, but not least, I'd like to say that this book is for everyone! So, pick up your devices and start to read this book A.S.A.P!

Great!

Firstly, I want to say how amazing it is that this writer wrote this book even if with a few grammatical mistakes. It is truly an accomplishment!
Next, I want to congratulate the writer on the beauty of the fact that the readers are able to grope on to the emotions and the descriptions of the main characters, even if it was a third person's point of view! I don't know how I could have made it any better! All I found problematic was the grammar, but I truly loved everything else!

The description really caught my eye!

The descriptions this author uses is probably the most amazing thing about the book, and that is saying something! I can imagine every scene clearly in my head, I can feel every emotion that the author is trying to portray, The book takes us on an adventure with many twists and turns. I can't point out one mistake other than the few grammatical mistakes that even an editor would ignore! I could read this book many times and never tire of the beauty in the descriptions and the plot!

4 stars!

This book is truly the most erotic book that has been read by me. I would say that the grammar is quite off putting, but everything else is quite nice.
- Norleigh (Ulta's Sister)

Very creative!

I love how the author develops the characters personality! The depiction of the different characters and their emotions and personality really caught me off guard. I felt every one of the emotions coming through. I loved the fact that the plot took change in every direction and the main character was not the "good" girl like in every story. It was different than other books I have read. The grammar was slightly off, but still better than other books I have read. I truly enjoyed it!

Amazing!

This is one of the only books that I have read without many grammatical errors and that just pulled me into the trap this author has created. The book has so many tiny details, from the heights and the looks of people to the passion with which she has written. I don't know how this can be better, it's truly amazing!

Amazing!

I love how the actual book is better than what you might think when you first saw it! It's so beautiful how the story progresses. Give it a read instead of reading this review!

Loooooooooooove!!!

This book is soooo enticing. I would read it if I was you. The structure of the story starts off as very sarcastic, but it is quite beautiful and amazing. The characters were so kind to the end. So amazing!

Amazing!

The book is very much in detail, which is one of my favorite parts of the book. Other than that, the plot is very enticing, although it does need a bit of help, as at some points it moves too fast, or too slow. Otherwise, the character development is seen easily even in the first chapter. The grammatical errors caused me to not love the book, but it's pretty good otherwise.

Good book.

Really good book, but has a lot of grammatical errors. That, and the sentences being run-on and the whole chapter being in one paragraph caused me to give you 4 stars. The story is great otherwise!

Pretty Good.

My average review is 4 stars, because I loved the plot of the book, but I thought it moved very fast in some chapters and too slow in others. Otherwise, it was pretty amazing! Keep it up, and keep growing!

So funny!

It's so humorous, one of my favorite genres, so it is really amazing!

I love it!

This book has a different view on werewolves, so I love it!