urlocalikea

Hi hi I write a lot of genres, fantasy, historical fiction and mystery with some romance 🦋I hope you like it :)

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Intriguing

I loved your use of descriptive language, everything felt very real and connected, the plot surely is an page turner and you went into detail with a lot of things which I appreciated. I’d say use more dialogue so it feels more personal and humane.

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Loved it!

It was quite the intriguing chapter in all honesty, I am excited to see how you develop the MC’s personality traits etc. it was a tiny bit lengthy but I paid attention for the most of it which was surprising. I’d like to see where you go with this story and how the characters develop. Your physical descriptions were near perfection it kept me on my toes!

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It was interesting

The plot and the idea of the book was definitely thought out and structured, but it was lacking in emotions and connections. A tiny bit more intricate word use is needed, Something to grab the attention of the reader. The plot was extremely intriguing however I’ll continue reading 💖

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