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Interesting

Although there are only two chapters, this story starts quite interesting. The characters are freshmen which makes me wonder how it will all link back to the title "A Broken Wedding". I like the internal thoughts of the MC about bullying and how blindly following someone could be harmful. It also shows how the MC is now more careful.

I like the descriptions as well as the imagery. Some of the sentences sound clunky but I'm sure Author will be able to fix it while editing. So, good luck. There are a few abrupt tense changes which can be easily fixed while proofreading.

I'm really looking forward to the reading more chapters. I am liking the story so far.

So I definitely recommend this story.

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