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Wendy's Dream

A delightful fantasy. The child's emotions are evoked well and the description of the 'flood' catches the reader by surprise. Minor spelling and punctuation errors to do not detract from this enjoyable tale.
Val McMurray

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The Good Kids

I found this story fascinating. The depiction of a small farming community in America is so well done. Erin captures the atmosphere of a sultry evening and the boredom felt by restless teenagers vividly. June's remorse is heartfelt and honest. She is a good kid. A thought provoking read. Well done.
Val McMurray

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These Waning Hours

An intriguing, well crafted plot.
A fascinating read. Left the hairs on the back of my neck quivering!
Definitely to be read with the light on.
Val McMurray.

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The Voices in my Head

Wow! The author has delved into the mind of her character so very well!
The story is well written and draws the reader into the disturbing action steadily, inexorably to the climax. Well done, Maria.
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Barefoot

This is a beautifully told story. The surreal description of the barefoot pianist is hauntingly memorable.
An enjoyable and well thought out tale. Congratulations.
Val McMurray

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