Venis Nytes

Former Book Blogger/Reviewer and indie author promoter turned writer. I love reading and writing fun, sexy fantasy/paranormal fiction with adult characters.

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Wonderful writing

This was a moving, well versed depiction of hurt, loss, defeat and growth. I loved the writing style and the emotional connection the author vreated with his words. Excellent work. A beautiful tribute to emotional pain and overwhelming depression that thankfully ends in a favorable way.

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This is engaging writing!

The writing is engaging, concise and well written. You can feel and easily connect with the emotions her characters display. There is a trace of realism in her writing that will resonate with readers.

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A fluid continuation of the Mind Night Blue series

So far the story is amazingly interesting and full of steamy action. The author has brought out the characters personalities in a way that feels engaging. I am excited to read more of this adventure and spin off of the Mind Night Blue series.

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Great story

A wildly entertainment story. I am thoroughly enjoying the characters and worlds. The characters are so well developed and the writing socks you into these foreign , amazing vista's and tales. Can't wait to read more

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A quick and dangerous read

The idea and plot of the story was great. The story pacing felt a tad bit rushed. A little more description about the job would have been nice. But overall it was interesting. Editing will make t by e story shine. The blurb was intriguing.

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This was sensual and heart-rending

There are parts that had me sad, parts that had me upset, parts that seemed too close to my own secrets and parts that had me excited. Your writing is special and I am glad that I found you.
I once read that it takes 45 years for an adult to get over childhood trauma.
I think we all try to find different distractions and fool ourselves into believing we are ok.
You have some amazing distractions in this story. I liked it very much and I checked out the YouTube video, absolutely romantic setting, but the elevator scene...wooo my goodness. Great jobon this piece of writing.

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This was a random read that I absolutely loved

I am a sucker for the gentle alpha males. This story has so much emotion and compassion. The back story was really interesting and the pacing was well done. The perfect combination of love, danger and suspense. I love this couple. Theo was really well developed. Glad I came across this story. A few minor edits but it was well written and I hope this writer has more stories coming. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Great story

Devilishly clever and well written. This was a nice quick and naughty read with well formed characters and personality traits.

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Absolutely Amazing Series

I loved the stories so much I followed this author here to continue reading it. I was bummed when a technical glitch didn't allow me access to the last story. I am so glad I could finally finish reading this amazing series. The characters were so wonderfully crafted and I laughed so hard at some of there shenanigans and felt bad when they hurt. I was invested emotionally in these stories. What a talented writer! Vrox is a madman and still my absolute favorite character in this series. I will miss him. I will be checking out more of this author's writing.

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Interesting.

This is an interesting story. I used tonread a lot of mythology stories in my youth so I am not sure if this is a retelling or just another take on how things could or may have happened. The writing is pretty well done, yet the dialog is kind of close together and makes it a little difficult to ascertain who is actually speaking. Otherwise interesting read , curious to see where the story goes from here.

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Cute story

Cute short story. I assume maybe done for a writing challenge? I l I ked the simple plot and especially the ending line. Good job.

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Really entertaining read

There is so much to like about this story, the whole series was amazing and transported me to their world. The scenes were hot, stories inside of stories, songs, I got a total package reading experience. I would definitely recommend adults to give this take on vampires a read.

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Great story

This second installment was just about as amazing as the first book. The story flow is wonderful, the scenes scintillating. What wonderful, sexy piece of writing.

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This is fantastic

Great opening chapter and the action and shut down....totally epic. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

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Raw and Emotional

The writings cascade over you with hope, hurt, loss, love, despair, and recede carrying them away in a wave of beautifully laid words. I read all of these powerful words laced with the pain of love given and not returned. This was a lovely collection of writing.

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One of a kind

I absolutely loved the way in which this author weaved the beautifully erotic tales while also touching on different topics of the human condition. The song selections enhanced the reading experience. Every chapter was amazing on its own and all together, spectacular. 💜💛💜💛

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Wow. Amazing story!

Your story is chock full of action, steam and mystery. I am on following you on the other site and love this story. The plot is engaging and the story pulls you in right away.Great job so far!.

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A cool read

The writing in and of itself is beautifully descriptive and poetic in its storytelling of fantasy , evil and love. Truly enjoying it so far.

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Nice start

I like the Journaling concept of storytelling. I am interested in seeing where the story goes and how it develops.

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Amazing Story

There were so many elements and plot twists. Oh, and the horror of some of the challenges they faced made you want to jump into the book and defend the characters yourself. Great story, Impressive writing. Well-developed characters. Eagerly looking forward to more of this author's writing

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This story was so much fun to read.

I absolutely loved the writing style and the concept. I found myself laughing out loud until my stomach hurt on some parts. The innocent statements told of the obvious differences between the two main characters and even though they were both strong in their own way they were an absolute perfect match. I accidentally discovered this writer on Wattpad and followed her writing over here. I am looking forward to the rest of the books in this series.

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Interesting

Your writing style is unique, interesting, and intelligent. It is also very technical. I was having a bit of trouble staying engaged with the story. It seems full of unnecessarily ambiguous words that seemed to detract from the tone and engagement of what looks like will be a well crafted and wonderful story. The ending of your chapters are perfect leaving the reader curious for more. You seemed to have found your unique voice in chapter 3. That is what I was searching for throughout your story. Keep writing, I will keep reading.

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