Will Review Again
I'm only on chapter 1 and will try to review again when I've read more.
A good read through would have caught the several typos and fragment sentences left behind. There are also a few narrative jumps made that don't quite land right for the reader. I gave the story three stars because so far, there wasn't much to capture my attention. I will review again when I've read more, I'm just finding it slow to get my attention.