Vivyan Lynne

San Jose

Just graduated college and now I'm working in the tech field. I'm a hopeless romantic, looking to fall in love with books and writing.

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I'm only on chapter 1 and will try to review again when I've read more.

A good read through would have caught the several typos and fragment sentences left behind. There are also a few narrative jumps made that don't quite land right for the reader. I gave the story three stars because so far, there wasn't much to capture my attention. I will review again when I've read more, I'm just finding it slow to get my attention.

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