VIOSHED

Manchester, UK

I like to read stories with strong emotions, which can lead the protagonists to do dark and dangerous things. Now, I write them.

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Three big, bad, Alphas

I like your writing style. The story flows smoothly and it is not problematic to understand. Although, there are some parts that you are not explaining in detail, about how things got there, or why is happening. The interaction with the characters could be improved a bit more, expressing better their feelings, like is not believable why the change of heart.
I believe that if you improve in developing a strong dialog between them, your story will be more awesome than it is right now.

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Good story

I love this kind of plots

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I like it very much

The female protagonist is so cute, I like her character and the incense she displays

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Very intrigued so far, is not yet clear till this point, but I will wait for the update

Really intrigued, this kind of mistery plot and darkness surrounding the characters are good to keep you reading non stop

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sad but fare

We always expect a happy ending, but this one was pretty good actual, was worthy...

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Interesting and passionate story

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