Vish

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Going Good

The story is going well so far, and I'm sure there will be more characters with additional elemental abilities. I think you have an awesome story to tell. I'm looking forward to it. You'll need to work on character emotions a little, but it'll get better overtime. Have fun writing.

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Excellent Poetry Collection

I had fun reading this collection of poems because they are mostly relatable. Please keep posting; I anticipate reading more of your poems.

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