DRAGONKING 99

Don't let people change you no matter what. You are YOU. You are UNIQUE. If you let people do that, you'll lose your identity and you'll be stuck in a void of darkness forever.

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AMAZING WORK!!!

This was amazing! I literally read the whole book in 2 days lol. I stayed up until 4 am last night getting half-way through the book and finished today (would've finished yesterday if fatigue wasn't a thing) I loved every second of it! Thanks for being able to entertain me with this wonderful book! I saw a few grammar mistakes, but those are really easy to fix (you can use grammarly.com if you can't find all of them but you think there are some you missed. It is really really easy to use).

As for the story, I loved it! I loved how Hayden changed from an innocent girl to a straight-up don't mess with me badass in a matter of 24 chapters! LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! I can't wait for the next update!

Great job, Holland! Keep on writing, girl! You're going to be bigger than Stephanie Meyer and J.K Rowling in no time! Don't give up! You have a natural talent and I believe that you will be great (I mean you're great right now, but if you keep working hard on improving, you can be even better!)

Best of luck,

-Jay

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LOVE THIS PIECE OF ART!!

I loved this! It was so true. I thought it was funny how you chose to swear in it lmao! Loved every line! Keep up the good work!

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Legendary!

Loved this! It was so powerful!!

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Best Book on Inkitt!!!

Hey, Ally! I just finished chapters 1-6 and I loved every second of it. In chapter six, when Owen and Noah broke her leg, my heart stopped for a minute. My leg actually started hurting a little when I read it because it was so... real! I loved it (not the pain obviously haha), but the story. Ashley is a really well-made character. I love her! Lane was also really cool. A jerk, but a good overall character.

The thing that I think could use work on is how there are events that don´t make sense. Like points in the plot that the book says happen, but you don´t see happen. Correct me if I´m wrong, but that´s just confusing to me.
Loved the book nevertheless. I loved the plot. I loved the idea of Ashley and Lane having superpowers. When this is done, I´ll be sure to review it again. I´m really excited to see where Ashley´s and Lane´s relationship goes. Hopefully, Owen and Noah stop abusing her too. That´d be great! Haha.

Loved every second of this read. Hope to see more.

-Jay

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