Best Book on Inkitt!!!
Hey, Ally! I just finished chapters 1-6 and I loved every second of it. In chapter six, when Owen and Noah broke her leg, my heart stopped for a minute. My leg actually started hurting a little when I read it because it was so... real! I loved it (not the pain obviously haha), but the story. Ashley is a really well-made character. I love her! Lane was also really cool. A jerk, but a good overall character.
The thing that I think could use work on is how there are events that don´t make sense. Like points in the plot that the book says happen, but you don´t see happen. Correct me if I´m wrong, but that´s just confusing to me.
Loved the book nevertheless. I loved the plot. I loved the idea of Ashley and Lane having superpowers. When this is done, I´ll be sure to review it again. I´m really excited to see where Ashley´s and Lane´s relationship goes. Hopefully, Owen and Noah stop abusing her too. That´d be great! Haha.
Loved every second of this read. Hope to see more.
-Jay
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