Best Book on Inkitt!!!
Hey, Ally! I just finished chapters 1-6 and I loved every second of it. In chapter six, when Owen and Noah broke her leg, my heart stopped for a minute. My leg actually started hurting a little when I read it because it was so... real! I loved it (not the pain obviously haha), but the story. Ashley is a really well-made character. I love her! Lane was also really cool. A jerk, but a good overall character.
The thing that I think could use work on is how there are events that don“t make sense. Like points in the plot that the book says happen, but you don“t see happen. Correct me if I“m wrong, but that“s just confusing to me.
Loved the book nevertheless. I loved the plot. I loved the idea of Ashley and Lane having superpowers. When this is done, I“ll be sure to review it again. I“m really excited to see where Ashley“s and Lane“s relationship goes. Hopefully, Owen and Noah stop abusing her too. That“d be great! Haha.
Loved every second of this read. Hope to see more.
-Jay
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