AMAZING WORK!!!
This was amazing! I literally read the whole book in 2 days lol. I stayed up until 4 am last night getting half-way through the book and finished today (would've finished yesterday if fatigue wasn't a thing) I loved every second of it! Thanks for being able to entertain me with this wonderful book! I saw a few grammar mistakes, but those are really easy to fix (you can use grammarly.com if you can't find all of them but you think there are some you missed. It is really really easy to use).
As for the story, I loved it! I loved how Hayden changed from an innocent girl to a straight-up don't mess with me badass in a matter of 24 chapters! LOVED LOVED LOVED IT! I can't wait for the next update!
Great job, Holland! Keep on writing, girl! You're going to be bigger than Stephanie Meyer and J.K Rowling in no time! Don't give up! You have a natural talent and I believe that you will be great (I mean you're great right now, but if you keep working hard on improving, you can be even better!)
Best of luck,
-Jay
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