Wilbur Whateley

Dunwich, Massachusetts

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Lots of Potential

This story has a really good start, and there is a lot of potential! The many punctuation and grammatical errors detract from the reading experience as a hole, though. Without them, I would have given the story 5 stars. They are an easy enough fix! Despite this, the story was still an enjoyable read!

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Heart Warming

I don’t usually read Romance-related stuff, but since you said it was a “short story” collection, I thought why not. All the stories were quite short and cute. They warmed my heart, and I quite enjoyed reading them. I’d say this is a worthwhile read.

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Exceeded Expectations

When I read the description, I had my doubts. The story didn't sound like something that would keep my interest. Those doubts were quickly put to rest when I started reading. The poetic writing style you use describes scenes in such an elegant manner that the writing style alone would have kept me reading. The plot was just an added bonus. Speaking of the plot, it was exceedingly enjoyable. I wish I hadn’t read it just yet though, because now I’m stuck in anticipation, waiting for the next chapter to come out. Seriously though, it was a worthwhile read, and I’m glad to be enthralled in Etan’s story. Also, the cover art should not go unmentioned. It is creepy yet fascinating, and I love it.

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