William F. Polden Sr. AKA: I am the dream writer

Tales of the Throne

Okay... I'm a seasoned writer... So, hear me. This book is a keeper. Read it! Seriously. I rarely run across a book that has TAKEN ME THERE... This book does. The story is well thought out /penned well / believable characters / (even the inhuman one's. TRUST ME/ give the proper promotion this will be on the best sellers list... I can see millions of copies of this title sold! A MUST READ!!!

She wolf ALPHA

Being honest (as I am) I did enjoy this piece. Though hard to follow at times The situation switching back and forth, then the interruption of the lab doctor interjecting I found myself bounding from on place to another without a shift phase in place. I short I had to guess where I was in the scenes. The story is good, don't get me wrong... there's a clear story to tell, but I felt I'd walked halfway into the storyline and seemed to hurry in trying to make sense of what I was reading to what I had read. This may be caused by NOT having read the prior of this series. The characters are strong though the transformation and the mental separation does lack information placing Ju and Juju apart. There's a continuing story here. though some of the important information 'between' is missing. The theme is good though should make a continuation of the series.once a fine toothed comb is placed on it.

The Social Misfits.

AS you'll have read many of the other reviews, there all pretty much accurate. I (more or less) lived this type of a life, the ups & downs, the friends changing directions and god only knew what rabbit the kids would pull out of their hat... needless to point out how the worlds pressures changed things faster than the oceans tides.. This is a good description of a real romance and love.. where things can and do change on a dime. A very clean well written story.

Spirit of fire

The realm is very well defined. The details to clothing and feelings throughout are actually overly defined, but the descriptions hold you close to the story. Character emotions are built 'female described' as the stout manly talk has a perfect females perspective to it. The fight scenes are well described and situations are believable through out the chapters. The characters are separated well, each with their own quirks and fragilities Some area's go into 'to much detail about singling out one distinct quality and the sentences languish to the reader to want to 'get past this already'... Never-the-less, it a highly captivating storyline and makes you want to see where it's leading too. The relationships are good cause they begin as any do, rocky and uncertain (which is awesome to read). The parts that are 'cautioned' are as well, believable and seem to be a truism of the authors mind. This is a well written story and I believe it will show good reviews and should be a best seller if it holds complete to the end.

Mommy's Lil Angel

It took me a minute to catch the scene, yet once I got my bearings about it, it became interesting... As I followed along, understanding the characters and the sudden change in scenery, I too was at this child's mercy... I'm taking it the child feeds off the blood of victims 'mommy' picks up... The sewer part is captivating to say the least. It a real rollercoaster ride from the first sentence... It will be interesting to follow this living nightmare. Over all, I enjoyed the ride.... SO FAR... Keep going, keep us on the edge of our seats...

Alazne

There's really not enough in in the first to chapter's to honestly rate the contents within... Oh, the stories there.. but (How do I say this).. It felt... well like 'box writing'. The outline fought the storyline.. Okay, it was 'gangbuster's out of the gate.. strong... Then, as I read... it was like it was not quite sticking together, like you were reading the words of the story, but not the ambiance within the story. The description of the characters was brunt, almost 'injected' within the conversations.. I got no sense of being there... The storyline has a strong idea to it... more 'meat around the potato's'... more details around the story where your standing (In a read you should almost feel like your 'there', living it though the story, 'escapism'... you want to be there) This felt like it was a figment in the distance I could never get close enough to catch what I was reading.
Again... YES a good story, Author has the right path... looks to be a lengthy novel... BUt needs to show the readers their actually THERE... I read the words, but there's... no cling to take me into it.
I WISH TO APOLOGIZE TO THE AUTHOR IF THIS SEEMS TO BE A "RUDE" REVIEW / IT"S NOT!...

IT A WAKE-UP,-SHAKE-UP CALL... YES, GOOD STORY! CHARACTERS GREAT! INTERACTION FANTASTIC! but, it don't take me into the story.... i'm just reading the words... nothing forms in my head..

The Best Present I ever had

The Best Present I Ever Had : This story restores my faith in miracles and reminds me of the importance of family. The plot reiterates the victory of heart over logic under circumstances where warmth, compassion, and togetherness bring out the best in humans. I feel that in some way the author has inspired innocence in children and the great feats they can achieve with a pure heart