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Good Plot, Needs to work on Grammer

I extremely liked this story back when I first started reading it, and still enjoy the plot immensely. However, lately it's becoming extremely hard to understand. The sentences run on sometimes, and combine subjects that don't make sense together. The grammar could be improved, too. I think this story would be great if the author made a few major tweaks to it.

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