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Chasing Clouds

Voldemort is back 29 years later, when nobody believed that he would return after Harry Potter defeated him. Now, it is up to his children to save the world again and kill his new serpent, Zmija.

Adventure / Romance / Based on Harry Potter And The Chamber Of Secrets by winniew6505 • Ongoing • 3 chapters

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More Than A Slave: Book I by Anaëlle Gadeyne
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Good Plot, Needs to work on Grammer

I extremely liked this story back when I first started reading it, and still enjoy the plot immensely. However, lately it's becoming extremely hard to understand. The sentences run on sometimes, and combine subjects that don't make sense together. The grammar could be improved, too. I think this story would be great if the author made a few major tweaks to it.

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