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A lesbian romance you didn't know you needed.

I love this read, each character is very dynamic and I love each and everyone of them. I flew through each chapter unable to put it down, it's not just a romance there's also real life issues. I love my girl Cooper! My only critique is how choppy the plot can be at times, maybe some more description of what's happening? Overall, loved.

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Wow!

When I read the chapters available I was instantly drawn in, the author is so talented at portraying emotion through her words. I was shocked to learn english isn't her language because honestly it was amazing writing. I feel a little lost on the plot but I think everything I'm confused about will be revealed, which I'm very excited for. Keep writing, I'm itching for an update!

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Intense!

I’ve only just started reading this book tonight and so far I’m hooked, despite only being 8 chapters in. The author has a great representation of teenage reactions to such a dystopian life they live. When I read this book I feel as though I’m there with the characters, experiencing everything they are. The writing technique is amazing and I’m excited to finish it.

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Wow!!

I started reading this book very unsure if I would like it because it's a brand new genre for me, but the writer truly made me fall in love! The writing technique is beautiful, each chapter keeps you hooked as she reveals a new secret in each one. The characters are dynamic and I have a soft spot for all of them. I'm excited for an update! My only note, some grammatical errors..but I get it I have them too. Overall, a great read!

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Groovy!

Can I just say I dig the vibe of this book so far? Lucy is living my dream life, haha. I love the vibe and the connection between all the characters, very nicely written. I wanna be their friends! My only recommendation is to add some spaces between the paragraphs as to not make it seem like one big long paragraph, it was a little hard to read because I kept losing my place. Great work besides that!

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Great start!

Reading this I found myself instantly sucked into a story that is certainly entertaining. Writing technique makes me feel like I'm there in the story. My only critique is I found myself struggling with the plot, at time's it was a little hard to follow. Besides that, it's great. Keep writing!

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Intense!

Wow! Reading this I had goosebumps the whole time, and I had my boyfriend check the locks. I know it’s just a story but I think I’m going to be afraid near mirrors for a while, haha. The writing technique is fantastic for building up that suspense that kept me on my toes. I enjoyed the writers ability to flow easily between past memories and present moments. Also, the mentions of race inequality was a nice touch.

Only two minor critiques, I would like to recommend to the writer that some of what happened could be separated into a few more chapters in order to pull the suspense further. Plus, some of the paragraphs seemed a bit lengthy and I lost my place.

Besides that, a really scary chapter and I look forward to an update.

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So far, so good

Honestly this book is a hook. I added it to my list thinking I’d read it later but after just the first chapter I didn’t want to put it down. I enjoy learned about the character and her rivalry with the attractive jock (who I know we’re supposed to hate but I can’t help but love). I blame the great writing style, making me love characters I’m not supposed to like. A very realistic dialogue that makes you think you’re a part of the conversation. I cannot wait for Wednesday for the update.

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Art!

If I had to sum up what I've read so far in one word, it would be 'art'. I've only been able to read two chapters and already I feel captivated in this new freezing world that I do not want to leave! While reading this story I recommend curling up with a fluffy blanket and a warm cup of tear, because the beautiful descriptive words will make you feel like you are there with the ice queen. My only critique for the writer is that while reading I lost my place a few times because the length of the paragraphs being a bit too long, but that is the only problem I found. Overall, an amazing read.

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Drawing me in!!!

The rise of Luna is the first story I’ve read about alphas or werewolves, and I gotta say I’m hooked. The writing techniques managed to get me attached to the characters only a few chapters in. This is a tense and sexy story that has me on the edge of my seat. I’m counting down the time till the next update, so I can watch the romance blossom and see how the resistance plays out. So far, a superb read.

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Tormented

This story is an amazing read! Every chapter has twists that leave me on the edge of my seat. The authors writing techniques have me falling in love with all of the characters, even the ones I’m not supposed to like. I definitely recommend reading this book, I myself am itching for the next update.

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