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Unique Quality Entertainment

I haven't seen such a unique way of writing a novel. This book is detailed but it is still holding back! I can't Book 2 could be bulkier than this and I can't wait to read it when it's done. The story had a lot of twists, I tell you A LOT! I read some reviews and the first review says it all. I would like to personally speak with the authors to conduct my own interview on them. The story has a beginning, has a climax, a conclusion! However, going through that road is really a roller coaster. Too many secrets to unfold and I also found some that show their love for their culture... Japan and Philippines. I also noticed that the two studied other countries and their culture and history.

Correct me if I am wrong but, You took some inspiration from The Nun (2018). That was epic!

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How did it end up like this?

The story itself has improved a lot. I can't say anything more. The present and past tense errors are gone and the story is now more interesting to read. I like the character and the world building. The names of the characters are catchy too. I'm surprised at the slow rise and sudden peak of the story and then cut to an abrupt end that calls for a sequel. I like the hierarchy and the how every chapter ends with How did it end up like this. It really screams the Ballad-ness, in my opinion. Good job! Keep it up, I can't wait for your next complete story :D

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Romantic and Cheesy

The story is already building up and I am personally excited to read the third book! The story for this one is good and it is creative in addition to it being cheesy with the romance aspects. The character dilemmas are very real in this story. There are moral lessons that I find very interesting. G is a mysterious character and I see him as both good and evil. Overall, Twilight of Death Verse, here I come!

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No Plotholes!

I haven't finished the book but i'd say that this is as exciting as the first. I read the first book again to see if the story was still as intact as I would expect it to be. Indeed, there were callbacks to the first book that I would highly recommend. There are portions that scream Ao No Exorcist. I also love the humor and the surprises added to the story. I have a guess about a certain character's true name. Hopefully I would get it right! Jose is still funny as ever. Akihiko is also surprisingly funny. Philippine Folklore is present. I want to ship two characters together but it would be taboo :(!!! I can't wait for the next chapters! I like the porn but the story is more lovable!

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