Writer’s Block

I write, I read (a little), I sing, I learn, I listen, I help, I love. I only truly wish for my readers to connect to my works, I'm glad to hear about it in the reviews. Love, always.

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You know I love your writing. I've read plenty of it. This one spoke to me more than anything else I've read from you. I don't know why. I don't know how. But I relate to it on a deeper level than I've related to many stories. Somehow, you literally took the thoughts in my mind and spread them out on a page. It's wonderful.

The story in its entirety is amazing. Lots of wonderful details, funny quips, amusing background. I really like it.

The plot only gets a 3 because I want to see more. I want to see where this goes, love. So, I know it's not done yet. You're a wonderful writer, and you always work hard for what you write. I know you can do more with this, and I hope you do.

The style, as usual, is perfect.

And the spacing was a bit off in some areas, but I'm sure you have a reason for it, hence the 4 in technicality.

All in all, I loved it. Please, please add more to this. It's such a good little hint of a truly wonderful work of literary art, my dear. Please continue writing.

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