xNozomiXD

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Sorry im new to Inkitt so im not sure how to do this XD But i found your fanfiction really pulling me in and I really HAD to marathon it in 2 hours because I love it so much! There are occasional spelling/grammar mistakes but it's fine due to the amount of words in this 0.0. I rarely ever read EliUmi's so this was a pleasure to read. I also love how everyone keeps stalking them and spying on them XD and when she said 'I love... Honoka..." I remember that really clearly because when I think of HonoUmi, I think of Manjuu so I thought that Umi was dreaming and Honoka asked her what she liked and she replied with 'I love manjuu, Honoka' XD But yeah, I love this and keep going with it! I'll be waiting for the updates!

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