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Lovely Set Up

From fleshed out characters, to a unique and intriguing plot, I can tell this is going to become a wonderful novel. The main character,"Annabelle" is wholly unique. She's by no means one dimensional. Sometimes mature and determined, at other times emotional. She's a bit of everything and I love that. The setting, it came to me with ease as I read the current chapters, so that just highlights how good your description is. The only critique, which I found by nitpicking is pacing. It seems a tad bit fast, but all in all, it's becoming a wonderful book that I'll for sure continue reading and I recommend others do the same.

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One of a Kind

From what you have so far, I like it. I love the main character, she seems logical, I like how she thinks before she acts. Then there's the plot, I'm entranced. I want to know who was whispering in her ear, why she can't remember what she did the previous night, and so much more. This is truly a mystery novel and I can't wait for more.

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