Fiona Apotheosis

Panama City FL

Yeah, don't contact me unless you mean buisness.

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HEy ummmm

So your writing style is good, but unprofessional. There are near no published stories that have that long of paragraphs. All of my stories are spaced out like in many major books. I hope you have read them but won't pressure you. I like the plot a whole lot. But could we get some more background. I feel like I am swimming in water and trying to sing Singing in The Rain ate the same time.

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I just think you should read my book Tips for writing

Yeah, its in da title

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I hate it

Lets game it out!

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Gosh, I love this and can't wait for the next chapter

The suspense and characters make you want to grab the pages and stab them into their eyes.

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