I really like how you started out. It DEFINITELY got my attention. The story overall is very detailed, and quick. It doesn't stall nor slow down, giving the reader an active suspense on what's going to happen next. (I won't go into more detail, because I don't want to spoil it) I find the story very easy to read. Writing takes very hard work, and by the author's grammar and punctuation you notice that they did put their best effort into it. I really loved it, I mean it got me hooked! I NEED MORE UPDATES! I was amazed just by reading the first chapter! One thing readers look often in a book is the writing style and the content. I really loved the content and the way the author narrated the story is just amazing! The narrator curved each line so well that the readers could picture each line. AND the chapters are the PERFECT length.
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