Gabrielle.

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If 365 Dni and 50 Shades had a baby

This story is like 365 Dni meets 50 shades of Grey. While the story is engrossing the writing seems a little on the immature side. At some points the plot is just missing little details that would have made a more powerful impact. When editing, I would focus on those and I would also tone down the sarcastic jokes in the beginning, it made her sound like a young teen rather than someone who is socially acceptable to date a 29 year old. Other than that, I hope you keep on writing and I hope you are very proud of your work. Keep going!

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