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Brampton

|| Living in a Fantasy World with Unrealistic Expectations ||

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Truly Undercover

First of all, I just wanna say how much I love your writing style. It's really unique and it stands out among the cluster of authors. Secondly, I love how the story is thought out and there's a natural flow to it until the very end. The plot, the characters, the chapters; they were very interesting. I finished the book in less than a day.
A little recommendation from my side; The story would be even better if the imagery and the dialogues were a little more balanced and a few grammar mistakes here and there were fixed. But, most of them were hardly noticeable and they could be fixed by a proofreading the story.
Overall, I truly enjoyed the story! Keep writing!

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Inspirational

The poetry has nice balance of imagery and text. Each poem has something everyone can relate to like the summer time or the night sky. I really enjoyed reading them and I am looking forward to reading more.

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Amazing!

I really love this poem and the way it's written, I can easily grasp the story it's telling. The meaning behind it is truly beautiful as well. Keep up the good work!

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Nothing in the dark

This book was very interesting and I throughly enjoyed reading it! I love they way it was written and there were no grammar mistakes at all. Keep up the good work!

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Collection of Short Stories

I really like how you've started the story, there's a concept visible along with the plot and the setting which makes the story move smoother. I would love to read more inspiring stories such as this one since it talks about real issues that women have to face, even now.
I would recommend going over some punctuation and grammar and maybe balance out the dialogues with the imagery more. But, I loved reading it. Keep writing!

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The blood wolf

This is a great story, very addictive and I want to keep reading! No grammar and punctuation errors, the plot and characters are well built. I love how every chapter is descriptive and how the story is being told from different point of views in order to understand the imagery better. You know how to keep the readers captivated. I can't wait to read more of it!

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For The Dawn

This story was indeed interesting and different than any other books I've read!!

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The girl who lived in the shadow

I really love how this story was written. There is so much suspense and mystery, it kept me intriguing throughout the book. I like how the story is being told from different point of views in order to understand each scene better. Can't wait to read more of this!

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