yodemonsitsmeyagirl

Lovely!

The writing was perfect. The plot was fantastic. The character development was wonderful. I fully enjoyed this story. Great job and I hope to read more from you in the future!

Kept me hooked

I adored the relationship between the main characters. It was really sweet! I think the story moved at a nice pace and kept me hooked. Only thing I’d work on is the spacing between paragraphs. Great job on a great story!

Really invested!

I absolutely adored the plot of this story so far! I love Ruffles! I think every heroine needs a good animal by their side! I love the tug of war going on between the mates. I think it’s very refreshing to see opposition to the bond. I feel like it’s more natural for a strong willed character! Great job can’t wait for more!

It was good

So after reading the novel I have to say you had me in the beginning with the angst of her mother dying and her beginning her journey to meet her father. Although there were some inconsistencies with the plot. If the protagonist was trying to keep a low profile in a biker’s hood most people wouldn’t think to drive a Lamborghini. I would also proof read after each chapter. Overall it was a good quick read. It definitely has potential!

Wonderful!

The plot is wonderfully developed. The Characters are enjoyable and lovable. Great read.