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I really like the plot thus far, I think it's really interesting. It's also very helpful that you included a timeline in the end to further readers' understanding. The plot can move a little too fast sometimes but personally, I prefer that more than something too slow. I really like how you took actual historical events and wove fiction into them. It makes the storyline more believable than just saying this is that just because I said so.

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