Zoe McKay

Hey there! I'm an architecture student who has a passion for writing. Hope you can give my work a read and comment! You can also check out my wattpad profile under the same name. Happy reading!

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FORBIDDEN LOVE

The story seemed interesting to read. It definitely has great potential. It would be great if you could explain a little more about details. Descriptions are great and I love how you express what's inside the character's mind and what they think. I think that was a very nice touch. Grammar and punctuation needs a little work, but that's nothing you can't fix! :)

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Interesting

I love where you are going with the book. I love the whole high-school-bad-boy vibe in the book. Other than a couple of grammar mistakes ( you can overcome it once you write more so don't worry ;) ) and separation of dialogues, this book is heading for the stars!

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Hooked!

I read the summary and I was instantly hooked. Mystery usually is not my genre but I know it's a good book because I went on to read more after Chapter 1. Love the descriptions so much I could actually picture the scenes. Great work!

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