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please there has to be more

I hope that there will be more chapters added to this this is way too short. add more tothis year and then maybe add an epilog of how they got married 5 chapter is toooooooooo short. I like this because all the characters are awesome but lily us sort of a jerk in the first few years

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i loved it

I really loved this book because it reminded me of all the harry potter characters. it alsok made me think better of Snape. lastly because it made me feel like it was realistic because of the feelings and the way everyone though! this book is 8ne of the best books ever and I am not lying when I say that it is better then the real harry potter books. keep us your great work. can't wait to see more

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i loved it

this great book is more then I imagined. I lobe the ending of how Hermione was going to tell him she WAS pregnant with their third child. I liked how Snape was alive and how Hermione married him instead of marrying Ron. this book is amazing. I loved the plot and how they sometimes fought but always go back together. keep up the good work. maybe write a sequal to this about maybe their third child. or maybe talkj more about themselves. loved this book.

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why i love this book

this is a really good book I just wished of was thier whole life until their death.. is there another book for this series? well anyways I loved this book and I hope you guys keep doing more. please make a sequel to this. I think that others should read it because Everton will like the book because you can pick any character you want to follow. also because every character has a different personality. I really like how Ginny was included too. but maybe next time try and add other character s maybe at the beginning. please make a sequal. I really adore this book. I hope that if you make a next book it is as good or even better then this one. I really like the overall book is. I love the plot even though it was small and annoying lily Evans sort of got boring near the end. but the voldermont part got me interacted again

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