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“I Shouldn’t Have Touched Her”

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Summary

It was supposed to be just another quiet night. Just the ocean. Just the silence. But something was there… waiting. Not dangerous. Not kind. Just watching. And in a moment she couldn’t explain, Reva reached out— and touched her. She shouldn’t have.

Status
6mo ago
Chapters
9
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1: 'She Looked Back from the Water'

Reva wasn’t supposed to be here.

Not this late.

Not on this beach.

People avoided this place after dark.

She knew that.

Not because anything had ever happened—at least nothing anyone could prove—but because of the way people talked about it. Quietly. Casually. Like it wasn’t important.

“Don’t stay there after sunset.”

“Water’s different at night.”

Stupid things.

Reva never believed in any of it.

And tonight, she didn’t have the patience to care.

She just needed quiet.

The kind of quiet that didn’t come with questions, or messages, or people expecting her to explain what she herself didn’t understand.

So she came here.

Alone.

The beach stretched out empty in both directions, darker than she expected. No small shops glowing in the distance. No groups of people. Not even the usual sound of late-night traffic from far away.

Just the ocean.

Reva slipped off her sandals and held them loosely in one hand as she walked forward. The sand felt cold under her feet.

Too cold.

She paused for a second, pressing her heel down slightly, as if that would confirm something.

It didn’t.

“It’s just night,” she murmured, more to fill the silence than anything else.

Still, her eyes drifted toward the water.

Something about it felt… off.

Not rough.

Not calm.

Just… still.

Like it was waiting.

Reva exhaled slowly, shaking her head at herself.

“You’re really doing this now?” she muttered. “Getting creeped out by water?”

She took a few more steps forward anyway.

Because turning back now would feel worse.

The waves moved lazily, rolling toward her and stopping just short of her feet—again and again, like they couldn’t decide whether to reach her or not.

That was when she noticed it.

A ripple.

Out of place.

Not following the rhythm of the sea.

Reva narrowed her eyes slightly, focusing.

“There’s nothing there,” she said under her breath.

But she didn’t look away.

The ripple came again.

Closer.

And this time…

It wasn’t alone.

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