Amina Hazim

Bait

The best werewolf book that I have read. I really like Bastian’s character in the story it is alluring and great. Hope you continue writing.

Royal Arcanum

I liked how the story progressed from the start and there were very few grammar errors present but I know with nice editing that can be solved. Overall a great story

A beautiful novel.

I was hooked into this story from the very beginning and your writing style was so immersive. I think the plot you have chosen is quite different which is why I liked reading this very much.

Hope you produce more books like this.

My accidental roommate

The idea you got is really good but I don't know why but I feel like I have read this somewhere but maybe it is just my imagination. After all, reading a lot of books tends to mess your mind sometimes. Anyway I spotted a few errors in your writing but that can be fixed with a nice editing overall a really nice book. Keep writing.

Running from the shadows

This was a great read. The suspense and the way you build the characters are great. For me, I have always found it hard to write a thriller/mystery story it is just not my cup of tea but I definitely know how hard it is to write one and most importantly to keep your readers engaged well you have done it beautifully. And hats off to you. The only things that I found were a few spelling errors and missing punctuation marks if you could correct that then your book is good to go. Anyway, keep writing. Best of luck.

How mine ends

I loved your plot. The way the story progresses is at a great pace not too fast nor too slow. To be honest with you I was hooked from the start of your story. I think I would recommend this to anyone I know. Great work.

Forced

Wow, I was hooked from the start. A great story for a first time writer. I read your book till the sixth chapter and can't wait for more. As far as I read there was not much grammar error in your book just a few spelling mistakes here and there, but that is all. I would recommend you to use the Grammarly app. That will help you greatly in your writing. Other than that a unique plot and the book has great potential to grow even more. Keep writing.

Love

A great story. I enjoyed reading it. It was a like a breathe of fresh air to all the arranged marriage books out there. And let me guess I think Joseph is the guy she was supposed to get married to right? Any way hope you continue writing.

Strange infection

A great book. A must-read if you are interested in Adventure and action stories. I really enjoyed reading your book.

The social misfit

Wow, I instantly fell in love with your book from the very first chapter.

Alazne

Wow, a great story, which has great potential. Hope you keep writing more book

Runaway Highway

wow, Rosie really liked the way you tell the story. Great work, this was a different take in the usual love stories, I have read so far.

The Boarding School

I am a fan of the stories which are set in the 19's. and i really enjoyed this book .

Forgotten, yet forever remembered

The entire story had a light feeling which kept me smiling and at times laughing. And I really liked how you used that cute nickname, Jewel. Apart from a few grammatical issues, this is a beautiful story. And this is your first, I must say you have done a great job here. Also, don't stop writing because the more you write the better your writing will come out in the future.

Wow!

Just amazing. It was a great read and kept me hooked from the very beginning which has just right amount of spice to it. Hope you write more books in the future.

Hexwood academy

I was quickly immersed in the story. The story was very well written and it was so beautiful. The way you described the magic happening around the female lead made me feel like I was the person experiencing it. I can't wait to read more.

Keep writing. 🥰😘😍

A voyage.

Since you posted in the review that you wanted a constructive review so here it is.

Pronoun misuse in many sentences in the first chapter. Example: His father was a royal physician...

Tenses misuse. There are some places where you use past tense and then there are places where you use present tense. Example: (he takes care of Ramya) This should have been (he took care of Ramya…)

Punctuation. There are a few areas where the punctuation is missing and some places where it is not needed. So my suggestion is for you to run your chapter in the Grammarly app before uploading.

I would suggest that you use the show but not tell technique. I will give you an example using your story here from chapter two. The slosh of the crystal blue water against the hardwood was a soothing sound to the ears, the salty breeze that blew brought a chill that indicated that a storm was on its way…

Overall, the plotline is very beautiful, and if you can correct everything I think this novel will shine.

Hope you rise higher in your writing career. 🥰

Offered to the lycan kings.

Wow, simply a beautiful read. The book kept me hooked from the very beginning and I must say the character development was very well done.

keep up the good wok.

Witchofhe woods

I was hooked from the beginning of the story and I liked the way how you portrayed the witch to be a strong female lead because that kind of concept isn't seen in most the books now. And I am usually not a person to read in the third person point of view but I liked the way you presented it. The story pace was just perfect not too rushed and the details unfold gradually. Overall a great book to read. Hope you keep writing.

Great story

I was hooked from the very beginning of the story. Your description and the world building is really great. And I think this book has great potential.

Used and broken

Wow, I enjoyed reading your book. To start off I must say your plot is really great and the way the story flows is great too. A little advice I will give you here is that whenever you are talking about a dream or a past event make sure that sentence is written in Italian, that will it easier for the readers to read. Other than that a great story.

Caged by the demon

I really enjoyed reading your book, since I love reading fantasy your books was something that I needed to read in the weekend. But apart from that I think you have a lot of room to improve your writing style. But other than that I think this is a great book.

The last winter.

The storyline was amazing and you get connected with the story from the very first chapter too. But I would suggest that maybe you can rephrase a few sentences to sound better other than the story was amazing and I can't wait to see how this goes. Keep writing.

Letters

This story touched my heart. The plot was splendid and really enjoyed reading about all the letters between her father and herself. And the way the how the story was developed was great too it was not too fast neither too slow. Overall a great story if you love reading Jane Austen’s books.

Wow.

This is a book that will keep you hooked from the very beginning. The opening chapter had such a huge impact that it kept me reading till the end and I think there is nothing negative about the book. The thing that I enjoyed the most is the plot it was unique and out of this world I mean generally when you take a fantasy book you mostly come across werewolf, vampire, witches etc.. And I hope to see more work from this author.

Trial of love

The book made me feel most of the emotions that the propagandist felt and that is not easy to achieve but the author has done it perfectly well done. And I hope to see more books from you.

Deviant

I enjoyed reading the story from the start till the last chapter but the only difficulty that I had is the words that were being used because I had to use the dictionary every time I come across a word that I don't know. But other than that the character development and the pace of the story are great. Hope to see more of your word in the future.

Whispers of the heart.

A great book to read along with a hot cup of coffee. I think I will recommend this book to anyone. The best thing that I liked about your book is the writing style and I hope you continue writing more books shortly.

Roses are red so is blood

First of all I would like to say that you have got a great title for your book. The moment I saw it it made me want to dive right into this book and start reading. And I must say that your plot is great too it keeps the reader engaged which is what I look for in most books overall a great book. Keep up the good work.

Lotus

Hi, I red your book as promised and I must say I was hooked from the beginning of your story. The way your story flows is just perfect the only thing that I found was that there were a few places where the punctuations were missing but that can be sorted out once you edit but other than that a great book to read.

Las Vegas survivor.

I instantly fell in love with the book the moment I started reading it. The story had a very different concept from the usual romance stories. Great job keep writing.😊

What are you?

Well, I must say you have done a great job in writing but I think if you have a solid idea for your story then I think you should just continue your work. And I will help you whenever I have the time. Keep writing.

Best wishes from Amina

Every friendship has a beginning

Wow, the work is just splendid. I have never read a book like yours. It just made me want to read more and more and I never knew how the time flew by. A book that is a must-read. Great work Sofia. Keep writing amazing books like this.

Gone girl

I loved reading your book it kept me absorbed and I am so sorry that I couldn't review your book earlier since I was quite busy on the weekend and also I just felt like reading your book will the end. Alright, there was no grammatical error in your writing as far as I read but a few punctuations were missing. But I think you can sort that out while you are editing. And I think if you can slow your pace a bit it would be great it is just my point of view. But overall your story was something that I loved reading. Anyway if you could give me a follow then I will follow you back. If you are interested. Also best of luck in your writing.

Zany Destiny

In my point of view, the story is great as far as I read. Since this is your first book I will have to say that it does have a great start. But if you could correct the grammar in your story then it is good to go. Hope you write more books in the future. Best of luck.

Keep writing.

Snap

I really enjoyed reading your book I think the best romance book that I have read so far. I enjoyed reading how Rae fights anxiety it feels like I am experiencing that which is a great experience if I must say. I think I have only read one book that I loved that had this kind of disorder and the name of the author is Lisa Genova. Anyway, I hope you continue producing amazing books like this in the future.

Unforgettable love

I think this story is true to its title. It is unforgettable. I have always had a thing for mafia stories but I never came across something that I would like most of them didn't have the kind of punch I was looking for but your story beats everything that is out there. Wow. I read it till the last chapter and I can't wait till you update more. A truly splendid work that has left me speechless. I don't know how to express how much I love your story. But I am glad that I got to review your story. Because now I have a great mafia story to read. Please update as often as you can I just don't think I can wait.

The fued

You have a great plot there with strong characters and your writing style is nice too. I think this is a story that has potential. Keep writing.

The tales of the squad 13

The overall book was very nicely written apart from a few confusions on my part the story was great. It's just that I am not used to reading books that are written in third person point of view. But your is really nice. Keep writing.

Shadow shifters

Your book held me captive from the very first chapter. The way you write is just great. Usually, I don't really like reading a thriller but I think I fell in love with this book. Great job keep writing.

Foul and ugly mists

I was tripod from the start of the book. I really enjoyed reading your story your description is spot on. But I think if you break a few of the longer paragraphs then it would be easy to read. Other than that a great read of anyone is interested in reading about witches back in the early days.

The abandoned house

The story was nice from the start but if you describe more about the surroundings I think people will be captivated with your story and if you could make your chapters a bit long not too long so that it becomes boring but just enough to keep your readers interested. Other than that keep writing because the more you write the better you get at it. And always remember if your first book doesn't come out well your second book will.

The Ruby necklace

A really great story I already fell in love with you Anelle. The story has a lot of suspense in it can't wait to discover all of them.

Damon’s soulmate

The story held me captivated from the start. I really like your writing style. Also, the story was different and something that I loved reading. I know you already mentioned that the story is not edited so I am not going to comment on that but I think there are no spelling that I found you just have a few punctuation marks missing so I think if you can correct that then you are good to go. Great story with a steady pace. Keep writing.

Jules

Avery interesting plot, it kept me captivated from the start. And as far as I read there was no flaw in your grammar. But I think a lot of punctuation marks are missing and capitalization too, if you can correct those two then you are set to go. It is just my advice, I don't mind if you don't take it but if you correct all these mistakes now then it will be easier for you in the future because if you keep all this till the end to edit then that would be a lot of work. I have done that mistake and I had a hard time with that, so I am just letting you know so that you don't have a hard time later on. A great story so don't stop writing.

Heal my soul.

First of all, I would like to say that it is a great book I enjoyed reading it from the start. The way you write keeps a reader captivating and asking for more. I am not sure but I think I have read a story something like this but it is not similar to yours and I think I like yours better. Anyway, keep writing. You are doing great. And I hope you write more great book like this in the future.

Great book

I enjoyed reading your book. I think it was something different. And I hope to continue also. And I am so sorry I gave your review so late I was a bit busy the last week.

The rise of a luna

I believe I have not come across a werewolf story such as this. It is really nice. The best is I really liked Alpha’s sister. She looks to be a sweet character. I like how Erik did not reject her the moment he knew she was a human because in most of the books I have read the Alpha all out rejects his mate because she is a human. Overall a great book. Keep writing.

Ray of sunshine

An absolutely great book to read. The way you developed the story is really nice. I enjoyed reading your book. Hope you keep writing.

His Magnificence

A really great story. I like all your characters and the way the story develops is perfect. Keep writing

Fashion show

I like the way how Jack has a way of choosing his PA. And I really like Esther’s character in this book. A really great book. I saw a very few grammatical error, it that can be solved with a good editing.

Hunting lies

Wow, i personally like triller stories. And yours was just great. I really like Mia, her humor is awesome.

Stuck with you

I really like the story. The concept is great. Hope you keep writing. I like the way your female character has a strong front in this story. I will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.😊

Dormant love

The way the story is written is really captivating and I really enjoyed reading it. Great work

Raised by vampires

A really good book, the book held me captive fro start to finish . A must read, if you are looking for vampire stories.

when it happened

Nice story, Keep writing , I enjoyed it

Never A ever after

An amazing story, I liked it from start to finish.

Candyland

wow, a great book. I normally prefer watching horror movies than reading a horror book. But you changed my view on that, I never knew it will be this captivating to read. I love the way, how you keep the reader so hooked till the end of the chapter.