Although at the point of this review, this story only has five chapters, it's already more than enough to get the characters fleshed out. The mature Alys, reckless Audric, envious Cecily, and the smart Abby, all four siblings, with at least a chapter from their perspective, feels quite realistic and down-to-earth.
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Now of course a review needs some nitpicking, and I do have some. I feel the interactions between Audric and Edith (the girl he meets) was a little exaggerated, although given the time period of a few months, it's not over-the-top. The inconsistent spacing was also a minor problem, but I think it has to do with Inkitt's bugs, as I've had that problem myself. I would suggest using the preview function to check the spacing, and if it's off, add an extra space between.
Overall a humorous, fun start, although I'll be expecting some more serious plot development later. Great job!