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ALittleRacoon
A young novelist aspiring to create worlds that even Tolkien would be amazed of. Mascot: The racoon!
Simply...
Amazing. The kind of subtle yet detailed artistic expression of just a few colors is really masterful and awesome. Black, White, and Red is a beautiful poetry collection that one should read in their free time. In fact, it can be used in English classes in its use of various literary elements. Just wow.
Read the story nowGreat Beginning!
Even though this is a fairly new story with only one chapter so far, I feel there is already a sense of building up in it. The story overall in the first chapter was interesting as to set the pace and place for the readers to pick up. It was really easy to grasp the pace, and it's actually kinda chilling to think of a mini-purge by a killer.
For improvements/ideas, I think a stronger focus on horror would be nice since it so far surrounds the main character trying to avenge his friend. Maybe a plot twist? The Grim Reaper's identity? Cliffhanger end?
Very, very good beginning. Looking forward to the updates!
Review on the exposition
When I first read the teaser, I was immediately hooked since I'm a HUGE WWII fan and found the first chapter quite interesting. However, some parts were a bit too short, and I wonder if it could go a bit longer.
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