Allison C.

Hogwarts

Hey guys! I really love writing and I hope you enjoy my stories! I love to read and I'm a big Harry Potter fan! MORTEMA IS COMPLETE (currently editing).

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Honestly, it's a pretty interesting plot, but you have many grammar mistakes. You need to know the proper way to write dialogue and there was one time where instead of 'knight,' you wrote 'night.' Your descriptions are pretty good. So overall, it's interesting with some problems you should fix.

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Awesome description

Wow, awesome description! It's like a professional short story thing we read in class haha

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