Alphachoas

Hi my name is David and I live in the great state of Virginia. I am in sales and I write to pass the time. I am new to the whole writing thing but I hope to learn the ropes!

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Very Good!

Really liked them! Short but gripping. Would recommend as a quick read.

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From the heart

Hard to really rate poetry. My method of rating is simple. Does it connect? This does. Good job!

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Short but sweet!

I enjoyed this and felt bad for the programs! Poor AIs!

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Well written!

Very well done! Grips the reader right away! I can tell you had fun writing this and that makes it more fun to read. Keep it up!

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Good plot!

A few grammer issues, but hey we all have those. Once you get passed those it has an engaging story to tell. Keep up the good work.

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This made me feel sad!

I could feel what you were going through and it made me sad :( That is the purpose of poetry. To give us a window into your heart. Thanks for opening that window for us.

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Keep it up!

A few of the poems have multiple styles to them, which threw me off a bit. However I found them to be from the heart and in poetry that is the most important thing. Keep on writing and giving us that window into your soul!

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A real life story.

It is a good story, however I am not a fan of the dialogue. Without saying who is talking I get confused. Other than that everything is good.

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Extremely well written

The words flow off the page wonderfully. It is a very professional book. You are very good at what you do!

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Not too badly written

Definitely an adult book with adult themes. It is an interesting concept but one that has been done in different ways before. Although it is a very popular one. It will be interesting to see where it goes. A few grammer errors, but I know we all have those. My book has a ton, I find new ones all the time. I can tell you enjoyed writing this and that makes it more fun to read.

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Pretty good

A few typos here and there but I think that is something we all have. I like the story so far and am intrigued as to what will happen next. Please keep up the good work.

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