Alphachoas

Very Good!

Really liked them! Short but gripping. Would recommend as a quick read.

Short but sweet!

I enjoyed this and felt bad for the programs! Poor AIs!

Good plot!

A few grammer issues, but hey we all have those. Once you get passed those it has an engaging story to tell. Keep up the good work.

This made me feel sad!

I could feel what you were going through and it made me sad :( That is the purpose of poetry. To give us a window into your heart. Thanks for opening that window for us.

Keep it up!

A few of the poems have multiple styles to them, which threw me off a bit. However I found them to be from the heart and in poetry that is the most important thing. Keep on writing and giving us that window into your soul!

A real life story.

It is a good story, however I am not a fan of the dialogue. Without saying who is talking I get confused. Other than that everything is good.

Extremely well written

The words flow off the page wonderfully. It is a very professional book. You are very good at what you do!

Not too badly written

Definitely an adult book with adult themes. It is an interesting concept but one that has been done in different ways before. Although it is a very popular one. It will be interesting to see where it goes. A few grammer errors, but I know we all have those. My book has a ton, I find new ones all the time. I can tell you enjoyed writing this and that makes it more fun to read.

Pretty good

A few typos here and there but I think that is something we all have. I like the story so far and am intrigued as to what will happen next. Please keep up the good work.