Interesting outline but lacking detail
The story itself was very interesting, but there was very little characterization and detailing to the story.
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It took me reading through the first paragraphs a couple times to get the names straight. There were no details associated with the names and characters so all they were was names that I had to try and somehow keep straight.
Even by the end of the story I had no idea how anything looks. The holograph had no physical characteristics, the people had no physical characteristics, and the house's only physical characteristics were a couple of rooms and hallways.
This story has a lot of potential in terms of an interesting plot for a short story. The plot was engaging and was what kept me reading, but I felt like I was reading a white world with gray walls for rooms and black shadowy outlines for people. (I did imagine that the holograph looked like Spike from Buffy because spike...) but otherwise everything was a very blank world. Even a couple of details would have spiced it up a little bit.