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Good effort

The plot is pretty good, but I think you should put more effort into character development. The story structure also has space for improvement. It was pretty nice overall but I think you should work more on the grammar. Don't get me wrong they're only minor mistakes and could be dealt with easily. This is a pretty nice one for a new writer. Good effort! Hope this review helps you!

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