So like it's got a great plot idea. Just some facts need changed like in the first half it says 6 months she was kept (I like that idea better. It's more realistic when she starts giving in) then later she says a month. That doesnt make sense why she would give in so easy so quickly. And for 40 chapters she let's him do whatever and their relationship is sex and very toxic. Then suddenly he loves her. Grayson needs more character development and some focus since he is a main character. It just seems rushed. It's a good book but needs work. Because for 40 chapters he uses her and suddenly is in love? It doesnt make sense. He keeps her in a basement for 3 days with no food or water, shoots someone in front of her, says it's her fault and at the end she still loves him and the author has made no attempt to inform people of this toxicity which makes me think they think it's okay.
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