ArtistAtHeart

Pretty good

Honestly need some grammar editing and revising but it's a really good book. I really enjoyed it. Might seem repetitive to some other people like all the lying was a little irritating but overall a great read that I finished in like a day

It could be better

Well for one the author writes "dat could be the reason" instead of "that could be the reason." The author also extends a sentence that doesnt need to be. There's just too much said when it can be short. It's a good plot and all but the writing is subpar. There's not a lot of showing you what things look like. It's just the prison, the ceiling with stains. Like explain what it looks like. And it needs SERIOUS editing in terms of grammar. Maybe rewritten. And the author jumps around and gets details mixed up. Add some page breaks if you're skipping time. Its confusing. And just overall not a great book but a good plot idea.

Riddled with errors

There's so many errors. SO MANY. Sentences arent formed right. Every single time the word "to" is used it's the wrong form (yes every time). And the author promotes their patreon at every chapter so you can read the book faster that has errors on every other word. It needs revised badly. The concept is good, but the book itself is not.

Grammar is abhorrent

It's not good. It COULD be but the grammar is just TERRIBLE. The usage is TERRIBLE. The writing style is TERRIBLE. Pretty much needs scrapped and rewritten. Like it's so repetitive sentence wise and simple. "I went to school. I went to english. I saw the bad boy, I hid from the bad boy" and she gives her virginity away within a few chapters and then runs home. Theres no character development, we dont know anything about her or him. Its just not good. It could be but it's just not.

Needs depth

It's pretty good. Seems a little random and not fully thought out plus not a whole lot of any character development or seeing what a character was really like. There were so many secrets kept until the very end they dropped like 2. We didnt see her past, his past, anything. It's a good book but needs more depth.

Meh

The plot and everything is great. The writing and story itself isn't. It's all over the place. And it's random. "Break mom and dad up. No. Life will be hell." Then all he does is have sex and stuff in front of her..? But then saves her and acts jealous while telling her they're related and that's wrong and creepy. Like they need a steady growth. Not changing their minds every other chapter. And the characters need to be built up more. There's nothing there. What's Reid like? The sister? What's her name? I don't remember seeing a name. What's the mom like? How about going into their past about the dad more. What's Henry like? And not to mention Reid was supposed to pick her up so when her mom said to meet Reid she was already supposed to have met him and why was he in a meeting if he knew he had to pick her up and why was that detail forgotten???

Love It

What isn't to love? A werewolf book that isn't obsessed with sex. It's so good and I really hope it gets finished because it's my favorite book. Like seriously it's so good. I love it.

One Chapter?

Literally has one Chapter and says it's "completed" which was a let down as I was excited to start a new book. If you aren't going to finish it, might as well remove it.