Riya Vats

A Malice Heart

The plot and story are truly captivating. The character of King Malice is a breath of fresh air, with his compelling backstory and the emotional turmoil he experiences due to his childhood events. It would be beneficial to include instances that allow us to emotionally connect with the character on a deeper level. Additionally, I personally prefer longer chapters, but that's just a personal preference. Your writing style and character descriptions are exceptionally evocative, almost like touching the very air around them. I particularly enjoyed the cover of the book, which perfectly complements the story. Overall, I find the book highly intriguing and believe it has the potential to become one of the best out there. However, the ending felt a bit rushed. It would have been even more satisfying if it were given more room to unfold. Thank you for creating such an enjoyable book. Cheers!

Pieces of the sun

Your writing totally messed with my emotions! I mean, I went from hating those characters to feeling all sad and frustrated for them. But hey, I gotta hand it to you, your style of writing is pretty cool. The pace kept me hooked, although I gotta admit, sometimes I was like, "Wait, what's happening again?" But overall, I'm diggin' the story, man. Can't wait to see what happens next in the upcoming chapters! Keep 'em updates coming!

7 days till Heartbreak

Man, this story was totally awesome! It had me hating one character's guts and wanting to yank Val's hair out of sheer frustration. I mean, talk about a wild rollercoaster ride! I was glued to the book and finished it in one sitting. No doubt, it's a solid five-star read. Loved every single second of it!

I trust you are not G!

So, I just finished reading the four chapters of this story, and I have a few thoughts to share. First things first, it would be awesome if the title, you know like, "An Unexpected Scene," could be highlighted in some way, like making it bold or italicized. That way, it's super clear that it's the title of the chapter. I noticed some general spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the chapter. It'd be great if those could get fixed up, you know, to make the reading experience smoother and more enjoyable. I gotta say, though, the plot is pretty interesting! The title really captures what's happening in the story, and that connection is pretty cool. But I think the character could use a bit more fleshing out. It's kinda hard to fully grasp the situation when you don't know much about the character. So, adding more details about them, like their personality, background, and thoughts, would really help me understand what's going on. Oh, and the age gap between the characters. It's kinda glaring to see a teacher forcefully starting a relationship with a student, right? So, it would be good to mention how big that age difference is. It'll help make things less confusing and give us a better sense of the dynamics at play. Overall, with a little bit of attention to these areas, your book "I trust you are not G!" can become even more captivating and polished. I'm excited to see where the story goes from here!