BeautifulOmega

I have grown up always reading either when it was at school or in my free time at home. In the last 2 or 3 years I have become more serious towards writing my own books and sharing them with others.

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Stormy

Reading the chapters that have been already been published in this book so far I have loved reading every minute of it and I would look to suggest this book to others who enjoyed motorcycle books here on Inkitt. In the comments of some of the chapters I have offered a few suggestions that I do hope the author will take on board even if they do not use what I have suggested inside of their book which is okay with me. To sum them up a few of them were to just separate the paragraphs up a bit more to make it a slight bit easier to read and another one was just to maybe lengthen the romance between Gunner and Stormy so it just doesn`t blossom straight away in the first half a dozen chapters. However, everything about the book is great and I would have no other reason to change any of it.

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Veronica

From the minute I picked up this book I could not dare to even put it down. Everything else I was doing all came to a halt when I started reading and I badly want to know what else is going to happen. The relationship between Veronica and Joel is unfolding at a nice pace which is a grate thing because the author has made it clear that Veronica does not want anything from Joel. Adding the fuel onto the fire between the two of them making the story that much more interesting and highlighting where the two of them have ended up because of the decisions that have been made.
I definitely feel the chemistry between Veronica and Max an other plot development that is really well in the authors development of their relationship and the plot of the story. The author hasn`t given everything away between the two of them which is major bonus because I love the idea that they have not fallen in love in the first chapter and I can read the relationship grow and blossom.
Not really paying much detail to the finer details in each chapter but I haven`t found anything negative to say about the character development, the plot, and the overall structure of the story. If the author is reading this please keep writing as I look forward to reading the rest of the book and any other books that you have written.

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Unfortunately Arranged

From what I have read in the first three chapters of the story I can see through the authors writing style and skills that they are fresh at writing this book and although it does kind of show the book is heading into the right direction. Until the author has written some more I don`t really have much to say positively but I am sure the author will do a great job at building up their characters and the plot of this book for myself and others to read. Regardless, there are a few things that can be discussed and used as a suggestion for the author if they wish to use it later on.

First off the blurb does in fact need a large amount of work because it does not give you a feel of what the story of is about and it does seem to be a bit of a rushed five minute job. With some more time to think over what the story is about in more detail the blurb could present the book into a new light.

My last point of suggestion is the general look of the first chapter which feels like more an introduction to the characters, the story, and build up of the plot. In my honest opinion this is can digress people away from the story line and not grab the readers attention. Unless the author is dead set on keeping the chapter this way I think that it could be blended into the second chapter pretty easily.

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Learning from sin

I must say I loved reading this book and I could not put it down right from the first sentence in the first chapter. The plot itself - even though just focuses more on their relationship than anything else - really did grip me and that is something I do like from a book. Everting was consistent quick and easy to read which is what I like about a book as a reader. However the only suggestion I have for the plot is that there could have been some more bumps and obstacles in the development of their relationship to make seem a bit more realistic. It would keep the reader on their toes and it would to get to know the characters a little bit with any flaws or imperfections that they may have. Apart from that little suggestion of mine I can honestly say that I enjoyed reading this book and I most definitely will take the time to read it again over and over.

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The possessive Blackguard

From the very beginning I have absolutely 100% enjoyed reading this book. There is nothing that I could fault from the plot of the story right down to the writing style of the author. Through the duration of the book I have loved getting to know the main characters and the sexual tension that is between the two of them.

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The Alpha's Captive

Reading this book so far it has kept me on the edge of my seat and I am definitely enjoying what has been written so far. I can't wait to see what else can blossom between these characters and what the plot line is going to turn out like. This is a book that I would recommend to anyone and everyone who enjoys reading any book to do with werewolves. The plot is amazing and I like how the author has kept the main character's hearted for the Alpha all the way through the book instead of just giving it up halfway through. That is one thing keeping me reading this book that because it shows that the author hasn't given the hatred up within the main character. Some authors don't seem to keep that up in their story but I am glad this author has made it that anger known all the way through without letting it just flop.

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Unexpected

Reading this book all the way through I have most definitely enjoyed it and the whole plot. I could read more than once and I wouldn't forget it. However the only down side is that there could have been a few more twists and turns with their ex's to put me on the edge of my seat. Apart from that I could not fault this book at all.

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Bad Biker Bear

To anyone who is looking for a good supernatural, shifter, motorcycle type story this is definitely the book for you to dig your claws into. Reading this book it has a great mixture of a romance genre along with action genre and some erotic genre of the side. The whole plot of the story is consistent with some awesome character development. I don’t usually read male point of view books however when I read this one it has definitely worked for me and kept me reading and fully interested all the way through.

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