DareToDreaminShadows

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Mysterious and Well Rounded

I particularly liked the foreshadowing elements in this story and I think they've been used well in serving a purpose. I also admire the narrative throughout which makes the story unique. The use of ellipses also creates quite a dramatic effect and makes reading the text enjoyable overall. Keep Writing!

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DOLLHOUSE

This would probably be the first time I read a story online that didn't end with a cliche void of eternal happiness. I want to thank the author for the realism presented throughout the short novel. The story is a key centrepiece in outlining how nothing lasts forever and a happy ending does not necessitate a well-written story.

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