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Bizarre

A very different and intriguing work. I have only one problem cause it’s driving me fucking insane. Why the hell would his x send a letter apologizing for things he had no idea she did when she then required his help. Clearly she had his address she mailed him a letter. Also he could have called the brother. Just seems all very out of his way for answers on something that happened ten years ago. Also I need to know why a thirty plus year old man is not only living at home but why he is so child like. I needs the whys please. Lol

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I’m speechless

Simply a must read.

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I love the plot and story structure.

The author has an amazing idea and is certainly headed in the right directions. However it was clear the author wanted this to be immersive to the readers and very descriptive. I found that part lacking but would be a super easy fix with just upped vocabulary and depth into the descriptions. Sight is down very well but all the other senses and feelings are lacking. Just those small fixes and honestly I would think this author dose horror books for a living. (Once completed I will be going back threw and will hopefully be able to rewrite this review with five stars in every category)

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I’m shookith

I have deep rooted love of erotic fantasy and this book even incomplete hits every mark I desire in a book. It’s been awhile since multiple characters in one story have captivated me. Generally when I review a story they then just simply go into my reviewed reading list to never be picked up again. This one however will be going to my favorites of favorites reading list as well as moan library so that I can better keep up with how it progresses. I thank the author for recommending their work. This is book is quality that I would purchase a hard copy for. It’s not the run of the mill romance novel that we all purchase a paperback of at Walmart to pass time not this is a story I’d go to a book store in search of a hard copy for. I wouldn’t be surprised in the least if this turns into a series in fact I hope it dose just as much as I hope to see this physically published some day.

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Great Read

The author is remarkably good at conveying character’s emotions and reactions making this read a truly immersive experience and that’s what we are all here for right? I highly recommend this book for anyone’s next escape from reality. I myself am anxious to read on as this story progresses.

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I would highly recommend.

You’ve outdone yourself making such a submersible world. Your writing style is truly unique and this could definitely be something you could do as a career. You’ve managed to layer your characters beautifully. I look forward to reading your other work.

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Absolutely bizarre

This horror is unlike any you’ll read. The author has really honed in there knowledge of slasher films with this one. I do find it quite hard to follow in some places.

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Bit confused

I’m giving full stars because it wouldn’t be fair to just review on what we have so far. A few things though. The book is listed as horror. The description has a drama vibe and the poem like first chapter isn’t a good enough hook to draw me in for more perhaps if there was a second chapter beginning the story it would be fine and not as off putting. However the second chapter should just be part of the first perhaps even just the book description itself. I’ll be sure to keep this work in my list to see how it progresses to come back and give a better well rounded review.

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Superb read

Love?
Sex?
Politics?
Love triangle?
Fantasy?

This story has them all and initially I had thought that perhaps it was to much but no the authors execution is so good that it dose not become overwhelming. I would highly suggest reading.

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I’m certainly intrigued

I want to know more like why your MC is a hunter to begin with more into his back story but I get the feeling you intend to as time goes on. As there isn’t enough chapters for this to be a well rounded review consider it more of a first impressions that I’ll come back to later on when there is more to the story to give an actual review.
My one and only suggestion is you change the main category for this story to a thriller I just think you’ll be able to pull more of your audience in that category. Horror for the secondary category unless you plan to involve any type of romance then I’d advise you use romance as the secondary. Just because there are far more readers for romance books.

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Highly recommend

I’m really interested to know more about what they’re dreams mean. There seems to be a lot of symbolism in them. This author truly deserves a round of applause once again I’ve been immersed into a completely unique plot and looking forward for the updates to come. I also find it note worthy that the authors writing dose not over lap I’m not finding any over used terms or strong similarities that would make this book feel in anyway like her others. It takes real talent to achieve that.

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Absolutely exhilarating!!

The raw mixture of sensuality and horror is beautifully evened out. Currently separated, I’m extremely for the next chapter where I’m sure the author is planning a collision of the two. I can’t wait to see how this story plays out as it continues to develop. The authors writing style is impeccable to match her truly original story concepts. I really hope this book gets another update here soon!

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Melancholy

There is not a more accurate word to describe this story. This author has made quite an immersive experience one I’m not sure I’ve come across on Inkitt at all before. The idea behind the story is unique that goes with out saying. but what really impresses me is how well they conveyed fortune’s mind set, emotions, experiences and in rather short chapters I might add. But still it was more then enough detail to fully immerse me into the story. Fortune’s anxiety is simply palatable. I have a strong feeling the melancholy tone is here to stay and I’m liking it. I truly look forward to seeing this story progress.

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Overall stunning

Truly a very unique plot and idea for this story. You have description of the physical things down pat however I would enjoy depth in emotions and thoughts in every point of view I think It would fix the comment I seen a couple times about how everything felt rushed. Your characters are fleeing and fighting and given the situation that’s what you want. I just feel that by adding those details your work would go from great and unique to an amazingly immersive story that would hook anyone line and sinker.

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Time To play

The biggest reason this did not get full stars is I’m simply not equipped to really give a fair shake when it comes to romantic one shots. Clearly there is a reading base for it so I’m unsure if my critiques would hold true to your reader base. Only major critique I have is I found myself turned off by the psychology lesson as an intro. it in itself seemed like something I would read on the back of a romance novel but as a review/recommendation and not a bio. Overall writing was done very well I would have of course enjoyed my depth into back story and some conflict of interest but I’m just simply a dark erotic writer and avid reader.

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Wolves Among Danes

This book is easily a favorite of mine. While the inspirations for the plot and characters is easily recognized the author really has out done themselves on making this a truly unique and immensely submersive work. I highly anticipate the sequel being just as good and look forward to hopefully this being a long series.

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Mob mentality

The unique story line easily submerges the reader in which takes natural talent from the author to so effortlessly do so. I really enjoy the simplicity more often then not mob themed books have way to much going on or worse yet have an equally large CEO plot that I can never be bothered to get into. This one is although only just beginning is an addition to my library in certain to keep up with. I look forward to know how the author will continue the story and to see how many chapters are to come. Only having three chapters at the time I’m writing this so much story line and plot is already included I’m interested to know if this will be a short sweet novel or if the author will pull off a full length novel. I also look forward to seeing this authors future works as well.

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The Gemlish Girl Book 2: Primefyah

As with the first book this sequel did not disappoint and even at a point brought me to tears. It’s not often I get invested enough in stories to mourn fictional characters and the fact that I am is do to the authors ability to really rope you in with dark back stories and descriptive trauma. I would also half to say that this series in unpredictable does that is also a huge reason I’m praising the work of the author. all to often I’m faced with predictable scenarios when promised otherwise. That is simply not the case with this series. Looking forward to the third installment!

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The Gemlish Girl

This story was an unexpected gem when it comes to intriguing the reader to have to know what happens. That being said there is very problematic content in which the author dose warn of before you even get into the chapter however I’d like to just have one warning at the beginning because by you know the tenth chapter if that’s a no go for you, you simply shouldn’t be that deep in. It’s simply not a pass over type event the wrong doings are huge to the story as well as the main characters build up. I noticed the author tries to keep them brutal but vague I’d prefer if they didn’t but that’s my personal preference.

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Mixed Feelings

While I found it hard to get into the book I can not fault bad writing as the cause. The beginning simply didn’t entice me to go forward. (ceo/ mobster) I’m just not a fan of that duo personally. I’m also way more of a fantasy morbid erotica reader myself. If you are however into conflicting romance I’m sure this would be a great read for you.

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Twin Tormentors

Easily a favorite of mine but could be said for most of this authors works for me. Insanely descriptively erotic in a very twisted way.

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The Devil’s Liar

What we can see formed already in regards to story plot I’m expecting this to be quite an intriguing story. Hopeful for it to begin soon.

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Sinister Revenge

You write beautifully this story is captivating and so easy to submerge into for the reader. please continue you have great talent. My one and only critique would be genre placement I found it in horror but if you plan to involve any type of romance or erotica I would place it in those genres it would bring more traffic to your work. If you don’t plan on either of those aspects I’d place it in fantasy for more traffic. Sadly the horror genre isn’t as popular especially sence every other genre has books that could also be considered horror.

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Tight Spot

As with everyone else I found myself simply clicking this book out of shear curiosity with the absolute expectation of not liking it. However I couldn’t have been more wrong everything about the story was well written and unique. I have to agree this is series material an I do so hope this continues maybe even with other survivors outside of the farm. I mean forget the bird cult, what about what the tight are doing with the girls they take? We simply NEED answers.

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