Etexdan

@Etexdan TEXAS

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The Pack

Enjoyed the Original story. I think you did improve this story very well. I saw a few misspellings, but I don't judge because I'm the worst and it did not distract at all from the rewrite. You are a very good author that is easy to read and enjoy the story. Keep up the good work.

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Chapter 2 Damn it.....

Damn it, now I have to wait.

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Lost and renewed

I liked the story line, the concept and honesty between the two of them. If this is a stand alone book, I'm satisfied but believe there is more to tell . I look forward to another book in the continuation.

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Demon Witch

Oh...Come on!!!! Damn it.

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Mid West supernaturals

I enjoyed the story of your little town and all the supernaturals. Looks promising to future stories. Good job!

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Werecats

Enjoyed the story. It's too short for me. Do your other stories intertwine so the characters' cross story lines? This story has a good beginning to make an impressive story. Good luck in the future.

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The Fated Hellhound

Another great story. How do you do it. Completly enthrawls me so much that every moment I stop, I start reading again. Hope to read a continuation of this story. Loved every minute I read this story.

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His hybrid pixie

Loved the book. Even if it was your first it showed how talented a writer you are. Hopefully, the story will continue in the future.

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His Spirit Wolf

I really enjoyed this story so much That I read it twice. You are so talented as a writer and story teller. I look forward to more books. You have turned into my favorite author of all that I keep up with on this site.

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Fire & Ice

Enjoyed the continuation of the story. Grammer Nazis go away, enjoy the story. Too short and would have like to have read more. Do love your your stories and look forward to reading more. Wish you all the best.

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