Dark Cheese

Nice 👌

I just started this book bit it's already keeping my attention. Good job on the way you wrote this. Nice character build, and name.

Amazing

I haven't read the full story yet, but the part I have read has been great. The storyline is awesome, and it's got me hooked. There is good choice of words in the book to help the reader imagine what's going on. Great book.

Great book

The story of this pretty creative, and I like the use of made-up words. And the writing is good.

Great book

The writing is good. It makes the story come to life. Good job describing scenes, letting the reader imagine what the character is seeing. And great job on using patience waiting to write the climax when it seems best.