The first poetry of life felt a bit rough with its first few lines. Feeling more like rap lines rather than poetry. However, the second page on divine certainly fixed that problem with a lot more meat and a kept a flow I could follow extremely well. As for the final page, it felt like a mix of both previous pages. It flowed well outside of two lines which felt a bit short.
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Though overall the word choice felt very unique. I particularly like the third page as it felt like you were truly pushing your skills. In other words, page one on life felt rough, page two on divine felt almost calming and page three of true colors felt like you were pushing at your limits.
Either way, I did enjoy all three pages. I'm a bit rusty when it comes to poetry. Not saying that I never read it. I use to read stuff like this all the time but have been busy lately. I am glad you requested this one. I'm always a fan when it comes to alternate languages. Reading Greek was enjoyable and I loved your exploration of the ideas here.
This was fun. Thank you for recommending it to me.