IgalRyan

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Thrilling

The prologue was awesome and it definitely caught my attention immediately. The author went on and gave us good opening chapters. People struggling with drugs especially narcotics like heroine is definitely something worth writing about. From the novel I can see the author had explained that things aren't just black and white which is quite good. I had some little problem connecting the characters that's why I gave the writing style a 4/5 but maybe it's because it was the initial chapters. Anyway, I like it!!!

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Generally I like this story, it has a good start that makes it extremely catchy. The English and grammar is on point and for a person who loves fantasy and mermaids, I immediately got intrigued when I saw the word mermaid

However what I found concerning was the length of the chapters. I find the chapters quite long. Perhaps the author might split the chapters into shorter ones.

But generally I have loved the story. I even learnt some new words.

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Mysterious and Exciting

I'll do myself a review. I think it's good, it has a wonderful concept

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Amazing

It's an amazing story. Excellent description, good grammar, wonderful plot. The author has done a good job and we are waiting for more. thumbs up

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Impressive

The story is quite impressive. It is original and the author has done an excellent job in explaining each and every detail of the story. I also love the suspense at the end of almost every chapter and this keeps the reader on his/her toes. Keep it up. We might even end up having a blockbuster movie from this story

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