JaneCatt

One step

The story in itself and plot are interesting and pulls you into reading more. However, right in the first chapter, the writing is somewhat confusing. The plot is great but a little confusing at the beginning.

Touching

Although small, it's a touching and sweet poem. A beautiful tribute to a life cut too short. Really amazing. Not only the way that's written, but the fact that's meant to be a tribute to someone who died so young, before starting the long journey that is life, it makes one to reflect on our own life and bring tears to my eyes.

A good surprise!

I found this story by chance, really. It was due to the "Switchhero" that I found this story and I was immediately hooked to the story! I love this kind of plots so, I was like a magnet into it; very hard to make a pause, even if I have my mother tell me to go to bed at 5 A.M! Both the "personalized" story and the original one are amazing.
The writing is fluent and it makes us dive into the plot. I love it! It really makes us feel like we are in story, watching the events unfold. The description of feelings and places is amazing!

Can't wait to read more, including the sequel.