JayD33

Small town trials and tribulations

Absolutely loved this story. As much as I loved Elliot, I have to say that Colton was, by far my favourite character. Such a strong lead, with so much personal growth. As usual, the author has done an amazing job telling this tale, and I can not wait for future projects to be started/continued. Love your work!

Love in all it's splendour!

As usual, the author takes us on a beautiful journey. The characters are extremely relatable, each and every one - not just the leading roles. For a tale that started as a short story submission, this has been a rollercoaster of emotions and beautiful love, that I am glad I had the privilege to ride. As ever, I can't wait to read more from one of my favourite authors on this site. Keep up the fabulous work.

Rags to riches

The more I read, the more this story is becoming one of my all time favourites. Attention to detail is amazing, as is the beautiful love story between the main characters. I would also like to note how much I appreciate that the author throws in extra little details - like how Cole notices the chip in a tile during a difficult discussion. These details just make the story feel so much more 'real'. Loving this story and can't wait for future updates. Please note: the only reason I did not give 5 stars for grammar etc was for a few minor mistakes, and I think once I noticed that the characters' names were mixed up in the dialogue, which made me have to double read the paragraph to make sure that I knew what was happening in the scene. Overall, a brilliant story.

Totally captivating

Really struggled to put this down. Wanted to read it non stop, but the body must sleep! I loved the story line and the characters were very identifiable. I will admit to being a bit disappointed that we never got a steamy makeup session at the end however. I would love to see future stories revolving around Anthony Joseph and perhaps even Tony Joseph.

Romantic interlude

Love the story line and am eager yo find out how the story pans out for our main characters. However the overall grammar needs a lot of attention please. Misuse of pronouns alone makes it hard to follow at times and I find myself doing a lot of interpretive reading.

Thrilling tale of love and betrayal

This story has gripped me from the start. Spread over 3 books, I have been unable to put it down. Eager to see it come to completion.

Intriguing battle of wills

I find the characters intense, and the plot twists surprising. I fo struggle with some of the grammar, but overall, I like the story and am compelled to find out how it ends.