Kirafiredrake

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Bad Biker Bear

i like these short versions xD good job! looking forward to part two xD

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Mate me ( if you may) the melenium wolvsz

There are a few parts that need work (as in i feel some parts seemed rushed or repetitive) and the plot seemed a little too centered on one character at times, but i am assuming that it was because it is the prequel to the next adventure. overall it was a nice read :) there were many cute and touching scenes that made me both laugh and smile.
guess that's all for now n__n
take care and keep it up!!

(first time leaving a review on here i hope i did it right xD))

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