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It's good

It is a good story and with that a good start as a new writer myself I can't really give you tips on how to write it or anything like that so I am only going to say what went wrong,what I felt didn't fit well.So basically I just wanted you to start giving more info on the group of friends and how the band even began and on the main characters background.Also I know how it is to have grammar mistakes trust me in my stories I got a lot of them so this I am saying so you can double check your story cause I found some misspelling which were clear accidents anyway OVERALL I think you started great I love it I just had like a little click in my head about the beginning how you started it cause I was a bit confused at some parts like where the main lead started reminiscing when the band started

I am glued on this story

I am glued to this story and storyline.Honestly usually I be getting books on mysteries and never really reading them or giving them a chance but this one THIS ONE IS FRICKING LOVELY also I love my girl character and how good she is at flirting. I really wish this becomes a comic or a novel or even a game like the elmwood trail cause not even joking I love it and I would gladly continue reading this and loving it

Wow I have no words 😍🤯

I really liked it it's an amazing poem 😍

The love of this book

I love this book it is fantastic. The fact that it has mystery and suspense makes me not want to stop reading it. The magical yet mesmerizing storyline and words that are being used makes you think that you are in the story . It is fascinating the way the story unravels so smoothly and majestically. I really love this story, so keep up the amazing work, dear writer. I can't wait to read more. This book will definitely become a hit

Wow

I just love it. The love for her baby ,the grim reaper everything the plot is awesome and sounds amazing and exciting can't wait to read the next chapter or even a part two